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draft-ymbk-sidrops-6486bis.txt
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@ -603,7 +603,7 @@ Internet-Draft RPKI Manifests July 2020
The RP MUST check that the current time (translated to UTC) is The RP MUST check that the current time (translated to UTC) is
between thisUpdate and nextUpdate. If the current time lies within between thisUpdate and nextUpdate. If the current time lies within
this interval, proceed to Section 6.4. If the current time is this interval, proceed to Section 6.4. If the current time is
earlier than thisUpdate, the CA has made an error; this a failed earlier than thisUpdate, the CA has made an error; this is a failed
fetch and the RP MUST proceed to Section 6.7. If the current time is fetch and the RP MUST proceed to Section 6.7. If the current time is
later than nextUpdate, then the manifest is stale; this is a failed later than nextUpdate, then the manifest is stale; this is a failed
fetch and RP MUST proceed to Section 6.7; otherwise proceed to fetch and RP MUST proceed to Section 6.7; otherwise proceed to
@ -642,8 +642,8 @@ Internet-Draft RPKI Manifests July 2020
If a current manifest contains entries for objects that are not If a current manifest contains entries for objects that are not
within the scope of the manifest (Section 6.2), the fetch has failed within the scope of the manifest (Section 6.2), the fetch has failed
and the RP proceed to Section 6.7; otherwise the fetch is deemed and the RP SHOULD proceed to Section 6.7; otherwise the fetch is
successful and the RP will process the fetched objects. deemed successful and the RP will process the fetched objects.
6.7. Failed Fetches 6.7. Failed Fetches
@ -655,7 +655,7 @@ Internet-Draft RPKI Manifests July 2020
for termination of processing with regard to this CA instance. It is for termination of processing with regard to this CA instance. It is
RECOMMENDED that a human operator be notified of this warning. RECOMMENDED that a human operator be notified of this warning.
Termination or processing means that the RP SHOULD continue to use Termination of processing means that the RP SHOULD continue to use
cached versions of the objects associated with this CA instance, cached versions of the objects associated with this CA instance,
until such time as they become stale or they can be replaced by until such time as they become stale or they can be replaced by
objects from a successful fetch. This implies that the RP MUST not objects from a successful fetch. This implies that the RP MUST not

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draft-ymbk-sidrops-6486bis.xml
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between thisUpdate and nextUpdate. If the current time lies between thisUpdate and nextUpdate. If the current time lies
within this interval, proceed to <xref target="sect-6.4"/>. If within this interval, proceed to <xref target="sect-6.4"/>. If
the current time is earlier than thisUpdate, the CA has made an the current time is earlier than thisUpdate, the CA has made an
error; this a failed fetch and the RP MUST proceed to <xref error; this is a failed fetch and the RP MUST proceed to <xref
target="sect-6.7"/>. If the current time is later than target="sect-6.7"/>. If the current time is later than
nextUpdate, then the manifest is stale; this is a failed fetch nextUpdate, then the manifest is stale; this is a failed fetch
and RP MUST proceed to <xref target="sect-6.7"/>; otherwise and RP MUST proceed to <xref target="sect-6.7"/>; otherwise
@ -735,7 +735,7 @@
<t> <t>
If a current manifest contains entries for objects that are not If a current manifest contains entries for objects that are not
within the scope of the manifest (<xref target="sect-6.2"/>), within the scope of the manifest (<xref target="sect-6.2"/>),
the fetch has failed and the RP proceed to <xref the fetch has failed and the RP SHOULD proceed to <xref
target="sect-6.7"/>; otherwise the fetch is deemed successful target="sect-6.7"/>; otherwise the fetch is deemed successful
and the RP will process the fetched objects. and the RP will process the fetched objects.
</t> </t>
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</t> </t>
<t> <t>
Termination or processing means that the RP SHOULD continue to Termination of processing means that the RP SHOULD continue to
use cached versions of the objects associated with this CA use cached versions of the objects associated with this CA
instance, until such time as they become stale or they can be instance, until such time as they become stale or they can be
replaced by objects from a successful fetch. This implies that replaced by objects from a successful fetch. This implies that