diff --git a/draft-ymbk-sidrops-6486bis.txt b/draft-ymbk-sidrops-6486bis.txt index e08f9bc..0fc9dc5 100644 --- a/draft-ymbk-sidrops-6486bis.txt +++ b/draft-ymbk-sidrops-6486bis.txt @@ -603,7 +603,7 @@ Internet-Draft RPKI Manifests July 2020 The RP MUST check that the current time (translated to UTC) is between thisUpdate and nextUpdate. If the current time lies within this interval, proceed to Section 6.4. If the current time is - earlier than thisUpdate, the CA has made an error; this a failed + earlier than thisUpdate, the CA has made an error; this is a failed fetch and the RP MUST proceed to Section 6.7. If the current time is later than nextUpdate, then the manifest is stale; this is a failed fetch and RP MUST proceed to Section 6.7; otherwise proceed to @@ -642,8 +642,8 @@ Internet-Draft RPKI Manifests July 2020 If a current manifest contains entries for objects that are not within the scope of the manifest (Section 6.2), the fetch has failed - and the RP proceed to Section 6.7; otherwise the fetch is deemed - successful and the RP will process the fetched objects. + and the RP SHOULD proceed to Section 6.7; otherwise the fetch is + deemed successful and the RP will process the fetched objects. 6.7. Failed Fetches @@ -655,7 +655,7 @@ Internet-Draft RPKI Manifests July 2020 for termination of processing with regard to this CA instance. It is RECOMMENDED that a human operator be notified of this warning. - Termination or processing means that the RP SHOULD continue to use + Termination of processing means that the RP SHOULD continue to use cached versions of the objects associated with this CA instance, until such time as they become stale or they can be replaced by objects from a successful fetch. This implies that the RP MUST not diff --git a/draft-ymbk-sidrops-6486bis.xml b/draft-ymbk-sidrops-6486bis.xml index 5ff4d70..63f1682 100644 --- a/draft-ymbk-sidrops-6486bis.xml +++ b/draft-ymbk-sidrops-6486bis.xml @@ -694,7 +694,7 @@ between thisUpdate and nextUpdate. If the current time lies within this interval, proceed to . If the current time is earlier than thisUpdate, the CA has made an - error; this a failed fetch and the RP MUST proceed to . If the current time is later than nextUpdate, then the manifest is stale; this is a failed fetch and RP MUST proceed to ; otherwise @@ -735,7 +735,7 @@ If a current manifest contains entries for objects that are not within the scope of the manifest (), - the fetch has failed and the RP proceed to ; otherwise the fetch is deemed successful and the RP will process the fetched objects. @@ -755,7 +755,7 @@ - Termination or processing means that the RP SHOULD continue to + Termination of processing means that the RP SHOULD continue to use cached versions of the objects associated with this CA instance, until such time as they become stale or they can be replaced by objects from a successful fetch. This implies that