wording tweaks, lowest IP is server

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Randy Bush 2022-03-02 14:45:43 -08:00
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messages.</t> messages.</t>
</list></t> </list></t>
<t>In this document, the use case for L3ND is for point to point <t>L3DN is intended for use within single IP subnets (IP over
links in a datacenter Clos (<xref target="Clos"/>) in order to Ethernet or other point-to-point or multi-point IP link) in order to
exchange the data needed for bootstrapping BGP-based peering, EVPNs, exchange the data needed to bootstrap BGP-based peering, EVPN, etc.;
etc. Once IP connectivity has been leveraged to get layer-3 often in a datacenter Clos <xref target="Clos"/> environment. Once
IP connectivity has been leveraged to discover1 layer-3
addressability and forwarding capabilities, normal IP forwarding and addressability and forwarding capabilities, normal IP forwarding and
routing can take over.</t> routing can take over.</t>
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very large data PDUs while obviating the need to invent complex very large data PDUs while obviating the need to invent complex
transports.</t> transports.</t>
<t>The server, the sender of the HELLO, listens on the advertised <t>The L3ND peer with the higher IP address MUST act as the TLS/TCP
port for the TLS/TCP session open. The receiver of the acceptable client and open the transport session (send SYN) toward the peer
HELLO, the TLS/TCP client, initiates a TLS or raw TCP session with with the lower IP address.</t>
the sender of the HELLO, the TLS/TCP server, preferably TLS, as
advertised. If TLS, the server has chosen and signaled either a <t>The server, the sender of the HELLO with the lower IP address,
self-signed certificate or one configured from the operational CA listens on the advertised port for the TLS/TCP session open. The
trusted by both parties, as negotiated in the HELLO exchange.</t> receiver of the acceptable HELLO, the TLS/TCP client, initiates a
TLS or raw TCP session with the sender of the HELLO, the TLS/TCP
server, preferably TLS, as advertised. If TLS, the server has
chosen and signaled either a self-signed certificate or one
configured from the operational CA trusted by both parties, as
negotiated in the HELLO exchange.</t>
<t>Once the TLS/TCP session is established, if the link is <t>Once the TLS/TCP session is established, if the link is
configured as point to point, the client side SHOULD stop listening configured as point to point, the client side SHOULD stop listening