diff --git a/draft-ymbk-idr-l3nd.xml b/draft-ymbk-idr-l3nd.xml
index a8c3a35..c98b5a5 100644
--- a/draft-ymbk-idr-l3nd.xml
+++ b/draft-ymbk-idr-l3nd.xml
@@ -126,10 +126,11 @@
messages.
- In this document, the use case for L3ND is for point to point
- links in a datacenter Clos () in order to
- exchange the data needed for bootstrapping BGP-based peering, EVPNs,
- etc. Once IP connectivity has been leveraged to get layer-3
+ L3DN is intended for use within single IP subnets (IP over
+ Ethernet or other point-to-point or multi-point IP link) in order to
+ exchange the data needed to bootstrap BGP-based peering, EVPN, etc.;
+ often in a datacenter Clos environment. Once
+ IP connectivity has been leveraged to discover1 layer-3
addressability and forwarding capabilities, normal IP forwarding and
routing can take over.
@@ -478,13 +479,18 @@ Flags (bit):
very large data PDUs while obviating the need to invent complex
transports.
- The server, the sender of the HELLO, listens on the advertised
- port for the TLS/TCP session open. The receiver of the acceptable
- HELLO, the TLS/TCP client, initiates a TLS or raw TCP session with
- the sender of the HELLO, the TLS/TCP server, preferably TLS, as
- advertised. If TLS, the server has chosen and signaled either a
- self-signed certificate or one configured from the operational CA
- trusted by both parties, as negotiated in the HELLO exchange.
+ The L3ND peer with the higher IP address MUST act as the TLS/TCP
+ client and open the transport session (send SYN) toward the peer
+ with the lower IP address.
+
+ The server, the sender of the HELLO with the lower IP address,
+ listens on the advertised port for the TLS/TCP session open. The
+ receiver of the acceptable HELLO, the TLS/TCP client, initiates a
+ TLS or raw TCP session with the sender of the HELLO, the TLS/TCP
+ server, preferably TLS, as advertised. If TLS, the server has
+ chosen and signaled either a self-signed certificate or one
+ configured from the operational CA trusted by both parties, as
+ negotiated in the HELLO exchange.
Once the TLS/TCP session is established, if the link is
configured as point to point, the client side SHOULD stop listening