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draft-ietf-lsvr-l3dl.txt
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reassembly. reassembly.
L3DL is carrying relatively small amounts of data on relatively high L3DL is carrying relatively small amounts of data on relatively high
bandwidth links, and when the link is not active with other data as bandwidth links, and at a time when the link is not active with other
it does not yet have layer three connectivity. So congestion is not data as it does not yet have layer three connectivity. So congestion
considered a sufficiently significant risk to warrent additional is not considered a sufficiently significant risk to warrent
complexity. additional complexity.
Should a PDU need to be retransmitted, it MUST BE sent as the Should a PDU need to be retransmitted, it MUST BE sent as the
identical Datagram set as the original transmission. The identical Datagram set as the original transmission. The
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The authors thank Cristel Pelsser for multiple reviews, Harsha Kovuru The authors thank Cristel Pelsser for multiple reviews, Harsha Kovuru
for comments during implementation, Jeff Haas for review and for comments during implementation, Jeff Haas for review and
comments, Joerg Ott for review, Joe Clarke for a useful review, John comments, Joerg Ott for an early but deep transport review, Joe
Scudder for deeply serious review and comments, Larry Kreeger for a Clarke for a useful review, John Scudder for deeply serious review
lot of layer 2 clue, Martijn Schmidt for his contribution, Nalinaksh and comments, Larry Kreeger for a lot of layer 2 clue, Martijn
Pai for transport discussions, Neeraj Malhotra for review, Paul Schmidt for his contribution, Nalinaksh Pai for transport
Congdon for Ethernet hints, Russ Housley for checksum discussion and discussions, Neeraj Malhotra for review, Paul Congdon for Ethernet
sBox, and Steve Bellovin for checksum advice. hints, Russ Housley for checksum discussion and sBox, and Steve
Bellovin for checksum advice.
25. References 25. References
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Bush, et al. Expires November 7, 2020 [Page 32] Bush, et al. Expires November 7, 2020 [Page 32]
Internet-Draft Layer 3 Discovery and Liveness May 2020 Internet-Draft Layer 3 Discovery and Liveness May 2020

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or reassembly.</t> or reassembly.</t>
<t>L3DL is carrying relatively small amounts of data on relatively <t>L3DL is carrying relatively small amounts of data on relatively
high bandwidth links, and when the link is not active with other high bandwidth links, and at a time when the link is not active with
data as it does not yet have layer three connectivity. So other data as it does not yet have layer three connectivity. So
congestion is not considered a sufficiently significant risk to congestion is not considered a sufficiently significant risk to
warrent additional complexity.</t> warrent additional complexity.</t>
@ -1670,12 +1670,13 @@ q-->
<t>The authors thank Cristel Pelsser for multiple reviews, Harsha <t>The authors thank Cristel Pelsser for multiple reviews, Harsha
Kovuru for comments during implementation, Jeff Haas for review and Kovuru for comments during implementation, Jeff Haas for review and
comments, Joerg Ott for review, Joe Clarke for a useful review, John comments, Jörg Ott for an early but deep transport review, Joe
Scudder for deeply serious review and comments, Larry Kreeger for a Clarke for a useful review, John Scudder for deeply serious review
lot of layer 2 clue, Martijn Schmidt for his contribution, Nalinaksh and comments, Larry Kreeger for a lot of layer 2 clue, Martijn
Pai for transport discussions, Neeraj Malhotra for review, Paul Schmidt for his contribution, Nalinaksh Pai for transport
Congdon for Ethernet hints, Russ Housley for checksum discussion and discussions, Neeraj Malhotra for review, Paul Congdon for Ethernet
sBox, and Steve Bellovin for checksum advice.</t> hints, Russ Housley for checksum discussion and sBox, and Steve
Bellovin for checksum advice.</t>
</section> </section>