diff --git a/draft-ietf-lsvr-l3dl.txt b/draft-ietf-lsvr-l3dl.txt
index 2313300..79e7ad4 100644
--- a/draft-ietf-lsvr-l3dl.txt
+++ b/draft-ietf-lsvr-l3dl.txt
@@ -486,10 +486,10 @@ Internet-Draft       Layer 3 Discovery and Liveness             May 2020
    reassembly.
 
    L3DL is carrying relatively small amounts of data on relatively high
-   bandwidth links, and when the link is not active with other data as
-   it does not yet have layer three connectivity.  So congestion is not
-   considered a sufficiently significant risk to warrent additional
-   complexity.
+   bandwidth links, and at a time when the link is not active with other
+   data as it does not yet have layer three connectivity.  So congestion
+   is not considered a sufficiently significant risk to warrent
+   additional complexity.
 
    Should a PDU need to be retransmitted, it MUST BE sent as the
    identical Datagram set as the original transmission.  The
@@ -1761,12 +1761,13 @@ Internet-Draft       Layer 3 Discovery and Liveness             May 2020
 
    The authors thank Cristel Pelsser for multiple reviews, Harsha Kovuru
    for comments during implementation, Jeff Haas for review and
-   comments, Joerg Ott for review, Joe Clarke for a useful review, John
-   Scudder for deeply serious review and comments, Larry Kreeger for a
-   lot of layer 2 clue, Martijn Schmidt for his contribution, Nalinaksh
-   Pai for transport discussions, Neeraj Malhotra for review, Paul
-   Congdon for Ethernet hints, Russ Housley for checksum discussion and
-   sBox, and Steve Bellovin for checksum advice.
+   comments, Joerg Ott for an early but deep transport review, Joe
+   Clarke for a useful review, John Scudder for deeply serious review
+   and comments, Larry Kreeger for a lot of layer 2 clue, Martijn
+   Schmidt for his contribution, Nalinaksh Pai for transport
+   discussions, Neeraj Malhotra for review, Paul Congdon for Ethernet
+   hints, Russ Housley for checksum discussion and sBox, and Steve
+   Bellovin for checksum advice.
 
 25.  References
 
@@ -1788,7 +1789,6 @@ Internet-Draft       Layer 3 Discovery and Liveness             May 2020
 
 
 
-
 Bush, et al.            Expires November 7, 2020               [Page 32]
 
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diff --git a/draft-ietf-lsvr-l3dl.xml b/draft-ietf-lsvr-l3dl.xml
index ff88516..f06ccf6 100644
--- a/draft-ietf-lsvr-l3dl.xml
+++ b/draft-ietf-lsvr-l3dl.xml
@@ -410,8 +410,8 @@
     or reassembly.</t>
 
     <t>L3DL is carrying relatively small amounts of data on relatively
-    high bandwidth links, and when the link is not active with other
-    data as it does not yet have layer three connectivity.  So
+    high bandwidth links, and at a time when the link is not active with
+    other data as it does not yet have layer three connectivity.  So
     congestion is not considered a sufficiently significant risk to
     warrent additional complexity.</t>
 
@@ -1670,12 +1670,13 @@ q-->
 
     <t>The authors thank Cristel Pelsser for multiple reviews, Harsha
     Kovuru for comments during implementation, Jeff Haas for review and
-    comments, Joerg Ott for review, Joe Clarke for a useful review, John
-    Scudder for deeply serious review and comments, Larry Kreeger for a
-    lot of layer 2 clue, Martijn Schmidt for his contribution, Nalinaksh
-    Pai for transport discussions, Neeraj Malhotra for review, Paul
-    Congdon for Ethernet hints, Russ Housley for checksum discussion and
-    sBox, and Steve Bellovin for checksum advice.</t>
+    comments, Jörg Ott for an early but deep transport review, Joe
+    Clarke for a useful review, John Scudder for deeply serious review
+    and comments, Larry Kreeger for a lot of layer 2 clue, Martijn
+    Schmidt for his contribution, Nalinaksh Pai for transport
+    discussions, Neeraj Malhotra for review, Paul Congdon for Ethernet
+    hints, Russ Housley for checksum discussion and sBox, and Steve
+    Bellovin for checksum advice.</t>
     
     </section>