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draft-ymbk-grow-wkc-behavior.xml

@@ -45,17 +45,17 @@
         </address>
     </author>
 
-    <author fullname="John G. Scudder" initials="J." surname="Scudder">
+    <author fullname="Ron Bonica" initials="R." surname="Bonica">
-       <organization>Juniper Networks, Inc.</organization>
+       <organization>Juniper Networks</organization>
        <address>
           <postal>
-            <street>1133 Innovation Way</street>
+            <street>2251 Corporate Park Drive</street>
-            <city>Sunnyvale</city>
+            <city>Herndon</city>
-            <region>CA</region>
+            <region>VA</region>
-            <code>94089</code>
+            <code>20171</code>
             <country>US</country>
           </postal>
-          <email>jgs@juniper.net</email>
+          <email>rbonica@juniper.net</email>
        </address>
     </author>
     
@@ -172,9 +172,9 @@
       </texttable>
 
     <t>IOS-XR does allow Well-Known communities to be removed one at a
-    time (with a tweezers) by explicit policy; for example, "delete
+    time by explicit policy; for example, "delete community accept-own".
-    community accept-own".  Operators are advised to consult IOS-XR
+    Operators are advised to consult IOS-XR documentation and/or Cisco
-    documentation and/or Cisco Systems support for full details.</t>
+    Systems support for full details.</t>
 
     <section anchor="ianalist" title="Note on an Inconsistency">
 
@@ -214,8 +214,9 @@
     inclusion in this document, especially if their behavior differs
     from the examples described.</t>
 
-    <t>Vendors MUST NOT create additional communities that the command
+    <t>For new well-known communities specified (after this draft),
-    to "set" the community would not modify.</t>
+    vendors MUST treat "community set" command to mean “remove all
+    other communities, Well-Known or otherwise."</t>
     
     </section>