diff --git a/draft-ietf-grow-wkc-behavior.xml b/draft-ietf-grow-wkc-behavior.xml
index 15cad5b..8a69796 100644
--- a/draft-ietf-grow-wkc-behavior.xml
+++ b/draft-ietf-grow-wkc-behavior.xml
@@ -79,12 +79,12 @@
 
     <t>Well-Known BGP Communities are manipulated differently across
     various current implementations.  This results in difficulties for
-    operators.  Network operators are encouraged to deploy consistent
-    community handling across their networks, taking the inconsistent
-    behaviors from the various BGP implementations they operate into
-    consideration.  This document recommends specific actions to limit
-    future inconsistency, namely BGP implementors must not create
-    further inconsistencies from this point forward.</t>
+    operators.  Network operators should deploy consistent community
+    handling across their networks while taking the inconsistent
+    behaviors from the various BGP implementations into consideration..
+    This document recommends specific actions to limit future
+    inconsistency, namely BGP implementors must not create further
+    inconsistencies from this point forward.</t>
 
   </abstract>
 
@@ -178,8 +178,8 @@
     <t>In Juniper Networks' Junos OS, "community set" removes all
     communities, Well-Known or otherwise.</t>
 
-    <t>In Cisco Systems' IOS XR, "set community" removes all communities
-    except for the following:</t>
+    <t>In Cisco IOS XR, "set community" removes all communities except
+    for the following:</t>
 
     <texttable anchor="cisco">
       <preamble></preamble>
@@ -194,10 +194,10 @@
         <postamble>Communities not removed by Cisco IOS XR</postamble>
       </texttable>
 
-    <t>IOS XR does allow Well-Known communities to be removed only by
-    explicitly enumerating one at a time, not in the aggregate; for
+    <t>Cisco IOS XR does allow Well-Known communities to be removed only
+    by explicitly enumerating one at a time, not in the aggregate; for
     example, "delete community accept-own".  Operators are advised to
-    consult IOS XR documentation and/or Cisco Systems support for full
+    consult Cisco IOS XR documentation and/or Cisco support for full
     details.</t>
 
     <t>On Extreme networks' Brocade NetIron: "set community X" removes
@@ -219,13 +219,13 @@
       <t>The IANA publishes a list of Well-Known Communities <xref
       target="IANA-WKC"/>.</t>
 
-      <t>IOS XR's set of Well-Known communities that "set community"
-      will not overwrite diverges from the IANA's list.  Quite a few
-      Well-Known communities from IANA's list do not receive special
-      treatment in IOS XR, and at least one specific community on IOS
-      XR's special treatment list (internet == 0:0) is not really on
-      IANA's list -- it's taken from the "Reserved" range
-      [0x00000000-0x0000FFFF].</t>
+      <t>Cisco IOS XR's set of Well-Known communities that "set
+      community" will not overwrite diverges from the IANA's list of
+      Well-Known communities.  Quite a few Well-Known communities from
+      IANA's list do not receive special treatment in Cisco IOS XR, and
+      at least one specific community on Cisco IOS XR's special
+      treatment list (internet == 0:0) is not really on IANA's list --
+      it's taken from the "Reserved" range [0x00000000-0x0000FFFF].</t>
 
       <t>This merely notes an inconsistency.  It is not a plea to
       'protect' the entire IANA list from "set community."</t>