diff --git a/draft-ietf-sidrops-rpki-has-no-identity.xml b/draft-ietf-sidrops-rpki-has-no-identity.xml index 0768935..09984ae 100644 --- a/draft-ietf-sidrops-rpki-has-no-identity.xml +++ b/draft-ietf-sidrops-rpki-has-no-identity.xml @@ -86,7 +86,7 @@ authorization to speak for the named IP address blocks and AS numbers themselves, not their unidentifiable owners. - There is a desire is to authenticate real world business + There is a desire to authenticate real world business transactions with the signatures of INR holders. E.g. for Bill's Bait and Sushi to use their AS in the RPKI to sign a Letter of Authorization (LOA) for some other party to rack and stack hardware @@ -117,7 +117,7 @@ Registries such as the Regional Internet Resistries (RIRs) provide INR to real world identity mapping through whois and similar - services. They claim to be authoritative, at least for for the INRs + services. They claim to be authoritative, at least for the INRs which they allocate. RPKI-based credentials of INRs MUST NOT be used to authenticate