From f43d3aabccfea1c8094d9e803e711bd091317643 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Randy Bush <randy@psg.com>
Date: Wed, 22 Jun 2022 12:59:22 -0700
Subject: [PATCH] warren wants abstract addidion

---
 draft-ietf-sidrops-rov-no-rr.xml | 12 ++++++------
 1 file changed, 6 insertions(+), 6 deletions(-)

diff --git a/draft-ietf-sidrops-rov-no-rr.xml b/draft-ietf-sidrops-rov-no-rr.xml
index 6b704d9..415a73f 100644
--- a/draft-ietf-sidrops-rov-no-rr.xml
+++ b/draft-ietf-sidrops-rov-no-rr.xml
@@ -1,7 +1,5 @@
 <?xml version="1.0" encoding="US-ASCII"?>
 
-<!-- <!DOCTYPE rfc SYSTEM "rfc2629.dtd"> -->
-
 <?rfc sortrefs="yes"?>
 <?rfc subcompact="no"?>
 <?rfc symrefs="yes"?>
@@ -82,8 +80,10 @@
     
     <t>
       A BGP Speaker performing RPKI-based policy should not issue Route
-      Refresh to its neighbors when receiving new RPKI data.  A method
-      for avoiding doing so is described.
+      Refresh to its neighbors when receiving new RPKI data.  This
+      document describes avoiding doing so by either keeping a full
+      Adj-RIB-In or saving paths dropped due to ROV so they may be
+      reevaluated with respect to new RPKI data.
     </t>
     
   </abstract>
@@ -155,7 +155,7 @@
       In actual deployment this has been found to be very destructive,
       transferring a serious resource burden to the unsuspecting peers.
       In reaction, RPKI based Route Origin Validation (ROV) has been
-      turned off; and there have been actual de-peerings.
+      turned off.  There have been actual de-peerings.
     </t>
 
     <t>
@@ -286,7 +286,7 @@
   <section anchor="acks" title="Acknowledgements">
       
     <t>
-      The authors wish to thank Ben Maddison, Derek Yeung,, John
+      The authors wish to thank Ben Maddison, Derek Yeung, John
       Heasley, John Scudder, Matthias Waehlisch, Nick Hilliard, Saku
       Ytti, and Ties de Kock.
     </t>