From d5e577fc1db0727731040dd7f609879cb50cfd71 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Randy Bush <randy@psg.com>
Date: Fri, 12 Nov 2021 04:40:00 -0800
Subject: [PATCH] add pfs and mark

---
 draft-ymbk-sidrops-rov-no-rr.xml | 45 ++++++++++++++++++++++++++------
 1 file changed, 37 insertions(+), 8 deletions(-)

diff --git a/draft-ymbk-sidrops-rov-no-rr.xml b/draft-ymbk-sidrops-rov-no-rr.xml
index 6d00b30..65f2c6f 100644
--- a/draft-ymbk-sidrops-rov-no-rr.xml
+++ b/draft-ymbk-sidrops-rov-no-rr.xml
@@ -19,7 +19,7 @@
   </title>
 
   <author fullname="Randy Bush" initials="R." surname="Bush">
-    <organization>Internet Initiative Japan &amp; Arrcus, Inc.</organization>
+    <organization>IIJ Research Lab &amp; Arrcus, Inc.</organization>
     <address>
       <postal>
 	<street>1856 SW Edgewood Dr</street>
@@ -33,7 +33,7 @@
   </author>
 
   <author fullname="Keyur Patel" initials="K." surname="Patel">
-    <organization>Arrcus</organization>
+    <organization>Arrcus, Inc.</organization>
     <address>
       <postal>
 	<street>2077 Gateway Place, Suite #400</street>
@@ -45,7 +45,34 @@
       <email>keyur@arrcus.com</email>
       </address>
     </author>
-    
+
+  <author fullname="Philip Smith" initials="P." surname="Smith">
+    <organization>PFS Internet Development Pty Ltd</organization>
+    <address>
+      <postal>
+	<street>PO Box 1908</street>
+	<city>Milton</city>
+	<region>QLD</region>
+	<code>4064</code>
+	<country>Australia</country>
+	</postal>
+      <email>pfsinoz@gmail.com</email>
+      </address>
+    </author>
+
+  <author fullname="Mark Tinka" initials="M." surname="Tinka">
+    <organization>SEACOM</organization>
+    <address>
+      <postal>
+	<street>Building 7, Design Quarter District, Leslie Avenue, Magaliessig</street>
+	<city>Fourways, Gautang</city>
+	<code>2196</code>
+	<country>South Africa</country>
+	</postal>
+      <email>mark.tinka@seacom.com</email>
+      </address>
+    </author>
+
   <date />
 
   <abstract>
@@ -87,8 +114,8 @@
       target="RFC7313"/> from its neighbors to recover the paths which
       might be covered by these new VRPs.  This will be perceived as
       rude by those neighbors as it passes a serious resource burden on
-      to them.  This document suggests marking but keeping Invalidated
-      paths so the Route Refresh is no longer needed.
+      to them.  This document recommends implementations keep but mark
+      Invalidated paths so the Route Refresh is no longer needed.
     </t>
 
    </section>
@@ -108,14 +135,16 @@
   <section anchor="ops" title="Operational Considerations">
     
     <t>
-      Operators deploying ROV SHOULD ensure that the router implemention
+      Operators deploying ROV SHOULD ensure that the router implementation
       is not causing unnecessary Route Refresh requests to neighbors.
     </t>
 
     <t>
       If the router does not implement the recommendations here, the
-      operator SHOULD enable "soft reconfiguration inbound," and check
-      that this stops unnecessary Route Refresh requests to neighbors.
+      operator SHOULD enable "soft reconfiguration inbound," which
+      should cause the Adj-RIB-In to be effectively kept.  The operator
+      should then ensure that this stops unnecessary Route Refresh
+      requests to neighbors.
     </t>
 
     <t>