From 364bbaf773c84539faa92bc1535dad37dfd9b69e Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Randy Bush <randy@psg.com>
Date: Mon, 21 Mar 2022 13:08:08 -0700
Subject: [PATCH] -03 published

---
 draft-ymbk-idr-l3nd.xml | 34 +++++++++++++++++-----------------
 1 file changed, 17 insertions(+), 17 deletions(-)

diff --git a/draft-ymbk-idr-l3nd.xml b/draft-ymbk-idr-l3nd.xml
index c173dfe..ce99388 100644
--- a/draft-ymbk-idr-l3nd.xml
+++ b/draft-ymbk-idr-l3nd.xml
@@ -11,7 +11,7 @@
 <?rfc tocindent="yes"?>
 <?rfc tocompact="yes"?>
 
-<rfc consensus="yes" category="std" submissionType="IETF" docName="draft-ymbk-idr-l3nd-02" ipr="trust200902">
+<rfc consensus="yes" category="std" submissionType="IETF" docName="draft-ymbk-idr-l3nd-03" ipr="trust200902">
 
 <front>
 
@@ -542,7 +542,7 @@ Flags (bit):
     respond with an ACK PDU.</t>
 
 <!--
-    protocol "Version = 0:8,PDU Type = 1:8,Payload Length:32,Session ID:32,AttrCount:8,Attribute List ...:40,Serial Number:32"
+    protocol "Version = 0:8,PDU Type = 1:8,Payload Length:32,Session ID:32,Serial Number:32,AttrCount:8,Attribute List ...:40"
 -->
 
       <figure>
@@ -550,15 +550,15 @@ Flags (bit):
  0                   1                   2                   3  
  0 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 0 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 0 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 0 1
 +-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+
-|  Version = 0  |  PDU Type = 1 |         Payload Length        |
+|  Version = 0  |  PDU Type = 1 |         Payload Length        ~
 +-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+
-|                               |           Session ID          |
+~                               |           Session ID          ~
 +-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+
-|                               |   AttrCount   |               |
+~                               |         Serial Number         ~
++-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+
+~                               |   AttrCount   |               ~
 +-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+               +
-|                       Attribute List ...                      |
-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+
-|                         Serial Number                         |
+~                       Attribute List ...                      ~
 +-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+
          </artwork>
       </figure>
@@ -566,12 +566,12 @@ Flags (bit):
     <t>The four octet Payload Length is the number of octets in all
     fields of the PDU from the Session ID through the Serial Number.</t>
 
-    <t>The four octet Session ID uniquely identifies a session.  It
-    enables detection of a duplicate OPEN PDU.  It SHOULD be either a
-    random number or a high resolution timestamp.  It is needed to
-    prevent session closure due to a repeated OPEN caused by a race or a
-    dropped or delayed ACK.  It can be used to resume a dropped logical
-    session.</t>
+    <t>The four octet Session ID is a nonce which uniquely identifies a
+    session.  It enables detection of a duplicate OPEN PDU.  It SHOULD
+    be either a random number or a high resolution timestamp.  It is
+    needed to prevent session closure due to a repeated OPEN caused by a
+    race or a dropped or delayed ACK.  It can be used to resume a
+    dropped logical session.</t>
 
     <t>The one octet AttrCount is the number of attributes in the
     Attribute List.  A node may send zero or more attributes.</t>
@@ -632,7 +632,7 @@ Flags (bit):
     exchanged), and the Serial Number in B's OPEN is zero, then the A
     MUST assume that B's internal state has been reset.  All Previously
     discovered encapsulation data MUST BE discarded; and A MUST respond
-    with a new OPEN with a Serial Number of zero.</t>
+    with a new OPEN PDU with a Serial Number of zero.</t>
 
     <t>TCP KeepAlives should be configured and tuned to meet local
     operational needs.  Some defaults and recommendations are needed
@@ -654,9 +654,9 @@ Flags (bit):
  0                   1                   2                   3  
  0 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 0 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 0 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 0 1
 +-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+
-|  Version = 0  |  PDU Type = 3 |       Payload Length = 6      |
+|  Version = 0  |  PDU Type = 3 |       Payload Length = 6      ~
 +-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+
-|                               |   ACKed PDU   |     EType     |
+~                               |   ACKed PDU   |     EType     |
 +-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+
 |           Error Code          |           Error Hint          |
 +-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+