diff --git a/draft-ymbk-idr-l3nd-ulpc.xml b/draft-ymbk-idr-l3nd-ulpc.xml index 202f708..75ecfef 100644 --- a/draft-ymbk-idr-l3nd-ulpc.xml +++ b/draft-ymbk-idr-l3nd-ulpc.xml @@ -135,16 +135,16 @@ deployments use. - ULPC Type: An integer denoting the type of the upper-layer - protocol + ULPC Type: A one byte integer denoting the type of the + upper-layer protocol Reserved BGP Reserved - The AttrCount is the number of attribute sub-TLVs in the - Attribute List. + The one octet AttrCount is the number of attribute sub-TLVs in + the Attribute List. The Attribute List is a, possibly null, set of sub-TLVs describing the configuration attributes of the specific upper-layer @@ -183,7 +183,7 @@ If there are multiple BGP sessions on a link, e.g., IPv4 and IPv6, then multiple sets of BGP sub-TLVs MAY BE exchanged within - the BGP ULPC PDU or multiple BGP ULPC PDUs may be sent, one for + the BGP ULPC PDU or sepatate BGP ULPC PDUs may be sent, one for each address family. A peer receiving BGP ULPC PDUs has only one active BGP ULPC PDU @@ -208,11 +208,11 @@ Attribute may be used to signal preferences. If a peering address has been announced as a loopback, - i.e. MUST BE flagged as such in the L3DL Encapsulation PDU (see + i.e. MUST BE flagged as such in the L3ND Encapsulation PDU (see Sec. 10.3), a two or three hop BGP session will be established. Otherwise a direct one hop session is used. The BGP session to a loopback will forward to - the peer's address which was marked as Primary in the L3DL + the peer's address which was marked as Primary in the L3ND Encapsulation Flags, iff it is in a subnet which is shared with both BGP speakers. If the primary is not in a common subnet, then the BGP speaker MAY pick a forwarding next hop that is in a subnet @@ -345,7 +345,7 @@ The BGP session OPEN has extensive, and a bit complex, capability negotiation facilities. In case one or more extra attributes might be needed, the BGP Miscellaneous Flags sub-TLV - may be used. No flags are currently defined. + may be used. @@ -397,7 +397,7 @@
- This document requests the IANA create a new entry in the L3DL PDU + This document requests the IANA create a new entry in the L3ND PDU Type registry as follows:
@@ -408,9 +408,9 @@
- This document requests the IANA create a registry for L3DL ULPC + This document requests the IANA create a registry for L3ND ULPC Type, which may range from 0 to 255. The name of the registry - should be L3DL-ULPC-Type. The policy for adding to the registry is + should be L3ND-ULPC-Type. The policy for adding to the registry is RFC Required per , either standards track or experimental. The initial entries should be the following: