From d8ec584c2b1540fc8ff8e0d72296355861efa901 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Randy Bush Date: Wed, 13 Oct 2021 17:25:50 -0700 Subject: [PATCH] -08 published with serial number wrap changes --- draft-ietf-lsvr-l3dl.xml | 20 ++++++++++---------- 1 file changed, 10 insertions(+), 10 deletions(-) diff --git a/draft-ietf-lsvr-l3dl.xml b/draft-ietf-lsvr-l3dl.xml index 0d41bae..d2cd2c7 100644 --- a/draft-ietf-lsvr-l3dl.xml +++ b/draft-ietf-lsvr-l3dl.xml @@ -478,7 +478,7 @@ bit flips, see . If a Datagram fails checksum verification, the datagram is - invalid and should be silently discarded. The sender will + invalid and SHOULD be silently discarded. The sender will retransmit the PDU, and the receiver can assemble it. The PDU being transported or a fragment @@ -683,7 +683,7 @@ uint32_t sbox_checksum_32(const uint8_t *b, const size_t n) target="RFC1213"/>. This uniquely identifies the port. For a layer-3 tagged sub-interface or a VLAN/SVI interface, - Ifindex is that of the logical sub-interface, so no further + IfIndex is that of the logical sub-interface, so no further disambiguation is needed. L3DL PDUs learned over VLAN-ports may be interpreted by upper @@ -705,14 +705,14 @@ uint32_t sbox_checksum_32(const uint8_t *b, const size_t n) Nearest Bridge = Propagation constrained to a single physical link; stopped by all types of - bridges (including MPRs (media converters)). This SHOULD BE used + bridges (including MPRs (media converters)). This SHOULD be used when the link is known to be a simple point to point link. When a switch receives a frame with a multicast destination MAC it does not recognize, it forwards to - all ports. This destination MAC SHOULD BE sent when the interface + all ports. This destination MAC SHOULD be sent when the interface is known to be connected to a switch. See . This SHOULD BE used when the link may be a + target="ieee"/>. This SHOULD be used when the link may be a multi-point link. @@ -764,7 +764,7 @@ uint32_t sbox_checksum_32(const uint8_t *b, const size_t n) To ameliorate possible load spikes during bootstrap or event recovery, there SHOULD be a jittered delay between receipt of a - HELLO and issue of the OPEN. The default delay range SHOULD BE zero + HELLO and issue of the OPEN. The default delay range SHOULD be zero to five seconds, and MUST be configurable. If a HELLO is received from a MAC address with which there is an @@ -861,7 +861,7 @@ uint32_t sbox_checksum_32(const uint8_t *b, const size_t n) On session restart (new OPEN), a receiver MAY send the last received Serial Number to tell the sender to only send data with a Serial Number greater (in the sense), or - send a Seerial Number of zero to request all data. + send a Serial Number of zero to request all data. The Serial Number supports session resumption in anticipation of peers having a very large amount of state they would prefer not to @@ -1408,13 +1408,13 @@ uint32_t sbox_checksum_32(const uint8_t *b, const size_t n) When a sender transmits a PDU which is not a KEEPALIVE, the sender SHOULD reset the KEEPALIVE timer. I.e. sending any PDU acts as a keepalive. Once the last fragment has been sent, the - KEEPALIVE timer SHOULD BE restarted. Do not wait for the ACK. + KEEPALIVE timer SHOULD be restarted. Do not wait for the ACK. If a KEEPALIVE or other PDUs have not been received from a peer with which a receiver has an open session for a configurable time - (default 30 seconds), the link SHOULD BE presumed down. The devices + (default 30 seconds), the link SHOULD be presumed down. The devices MAY keep configuration state and restore it without retransmission - if no data have changed. Otherwise, a new session SHOULD BE + if no data have changed. Otherwise, a new session SHOULD be established and new Encapsulation PDUs exchanged.