diff --git a/draft-ietf-lsvr-l3dl.xml b/draft-ietf-lsvr-l3dl.xml
index df6d0c5..7e497e5 100644
--- a/draft-ietf-lsvr-l3dl.xml
+++ b/draft-ietf-lsvr-l3dl.xml
@@ -11,7 +11,7 @@
 <?rfc tocindent="yes"?>
 <?rfc tocompact="yes"?>
 
-<rfc consensus="yes" submissionType="IETF" category="std" docName="draft-ietf-lsvr-l3dl-09" ipr="trust200902">
+<rfc consensus="yes" submissionType="IETF" category="std" docName="draft-ietf-lsvr-l3dl-10" ipr="trust200902" version="2">
 
 <front>
 
@@ -85,12 +85,18 @@
     <t>The Massive Data Center (MDC) environment presents unusual
     problems of scale, e.g. O(10,000) forwarding devices, while its
     homogeneity presents opportunities for simple approaches.
-    Approaches such as Jupiter Rising <xref target="JUPITER"/> use a
+    Approaches such as <eref target="https://xml2rfc.tools.ietf.org/public/rfc/bibxml-doi/reference.DOI.10.1145/2975159.xml?anchor=JUPITER">&quot;Jupiter Rising: A study of non-blocking switching networks&quot; [PAYWALLED]</eref>
+    <!-- <xref target="JUPITER"/>
+    --> use a
     central controller to deal with scaling, while BGP-SPF <xref
     target="I-D.ietf-lsvr-bgp-spf"/> provides massive scale-out without
     centralization using a tried and tested scalable distributed control
-    plane, offering a scalable routing solution in Clos <xref
-    target="Clos0"/><xref target="Clos1"/> and similar environments.
+    plane, offering a scalable routing solution in
+    <!-- <xref target="Clos0"/> -->
+    <eref target="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Clos_network/">&quot;Clos Networks&quot;</eref>
+    <!--<xref target="Clos1"/>
+    -->
+    and similar environments.
     But BGP-SPF and similar higher level device-spanning protocols,
     e.g. <xref target="I-D.malhotra-bess-evpn-lsoe"/>, need logical link
     state and addressing data from the network to build the routing
@@ -1773,6 +1779,7 @@ uint32_t sbox_checksum_32(const uint8_t *b, const size_t n)
     <?rfc include="reference.RFC.1122.xml"?>
     <?rfc include="reference.RFC.1982.xml"?>
     <?rfc include="reference.I-D.malhotra-bess-evpn-lsoe.xml"?>
+    <!--
     <?rfc include="https://xml2rfc.tools.ietf.org/public/rfc/bibxml-doi/reference.DOI.10.1145/2975159.xml?anchor=JUPITER"?>
     <reference anchor="Clos0" >
       <front>
@@ -1791,6 +1798,7 @@ uint32_t sbox_checksum_32(const uint8_t *b, const size_t n)
         <date/>
         </front>
       </reference>
+-->
     </references>
     
   </back>