From a9c0b2df74380c70fbe05db37daea2ac24dcbce2 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Randy Bush Date: Thu, 7 May 2020 05:00:53 -0700 Subject: [PATCH] -04 published --- draft-ietf-lsvr-l3dl.txt | 4 ++-- draft-ietf-lsvr-l3dl.xml | 8 ++++---- 2 files changed, 6 insertions(+), 6 deletions(-) diff --git a/draft-ietf-lsvr-l3dl.txt b/draft-ietf-lsvr-l3dl.txt index 4d960b6..c987b7e 100644 --- a/draft-ietf-lsvr-l3dl.txt +++ b/draft-ietf-lsvr-l3dl.txt @@ -17,8 +17,8 @@ Abstract In Massive Data Centers, BGP-SPF and similar routing protocols are used to build topology and reachability databases. These protocols - need to discover IP Layer 3 attributes of links, such as logical link - IP encapsulation abilities, IP neighbor address discovery, and link + need to discover IP Layer 3 attributes of links, such as neighbor IP + addressing, logical link IP encapsulation abilities, and link liveness. This Layer 3 Discovery and Liveness protocol collects these data, which may then be disseminated using BGP-SPF and similar protocols. diff --git a/draft-ietf-lsvr-l3dl.xml b/draft-ietf-lsvr-l3dl.xml index 44663f2..dfae219 100644 --- a/draft-ietf-lsvr-l3dl.xml +++ b/draft-ietf-lsvr-l3dl.xml @@ -59,10 +59,10 @@ In Massive Data Centers, BGP-SPF and similar routing protocols are used to build topology and reachability databases. These protocols need to discover IP Layer 3 attributes of links, such as - logical link IP encapsulation abilities, IP neighbor address - discovery, and link liveness. This Layer 3 Discovery and Liveness - protocol collects these data, which may then be disseminated using - BGP-SPF and similar protocols. + neighbor IP addressing, logical link IP encapsulation abilities, and + link liveness. This Layer 3 Discovery and Liveness protocol + collects these data, which may then be disseminated using BGP-SPF + and similar protocols.