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draft-ietf-lsvr-l3dl.xml

@@ -224,7 +224,7 @@
       <t>Encapsulation data are exchanged and IP-Level Liveness checks
       enabled</t>
       <t>A BGP-like upper layer protocol is assumed to use the
-      identiiers and encapsulation data to discover and build a topology
+      identifiers and encapsulation data to discover and build a topology
       database</t>
       </list></t>
 
@@ -409,6 +409,10 @@
     There are no intermediate devices capable of further fragmentation
     or reassembly.</t>
 
+    <t>As fragments are not ACK paced (as PDUs are), a PDU might need a
+    large number of frames to be sent.  To avoid overwhelming bursts,
+    the sender should pace them ***********.</t>
+
     <t>L3DL is carrying relatively small amounts of data on relatively
     high bandwidth links, and at a time when the link is not active with
     other data as it does not yet have layer three connectivity.  So
@@ -844,7 +848,9 @@ q-->
 
     <t>Although delay and jitter in responding with an OPEN were
     specified above, beware of load created by long strings of
-    authentication failures and retries.</t>
+    authentication failures and retries.  A confugurable failure count
+    limit (default 8) SHOULD result in giving up on the connection
+    attempt.</t>
 
     <t>The Serial Number is that of the last received and processed PDU.
     This allows a receiver sending an OPEN to tell the sender that the