From 0c054c3346117e1939173a02a9e804072f7c866e Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Randy Bush Date: Thu, 7 May 2020 04:35:39 -0700 Subject: [PATCH] disambiguate speakers A and B in a reopen --- draft-ietf-lsvr-l3dl.txt | 94 ++++++++++++++++++++-------------------- draft-ietf-lsvr-l3dl.xml | 10 ++--- 2 files changed, 52 insertions(+), 52 deletions(-) diff --git a/draft-ietf-lsvr-l3dl.txt b/draft-ietf-lsvr-l3dl.txt index e657120..4d960b6 100644 --- a/draft-ietf-lsvr-l3dl.txt +++ b/draft-ietf-lsvr-l3dl.txt @@ -5,9 +5,9 @@ Network Working Group R. Bush Internet-Draft Arrcus & Internet Initiative Japan Intended status: Standards Track R. Austein -Expires: November 7, 2020 K. Patel +Expires: November 8, 2020 K. Patel Arrcus - May 6, 2020 + May 7, 2020 Layer 3 Discovery and Liveness @@ -46,14 +46,14 @@ Status of This Memo time. It is inappropriate to use Internet-Drafts as reference material or to cite them other than as "work in progress." - This Internet-Draft will expire on November 7, 2020. + This Internet-Draft will expire on November 8, 2020. -Bush, et al. Expires November 7, 2020 [Page 1] +Bush, et al. Expires November 8, 2020 [Page 1] Internet-Draft Layer 3 Discovery and Liveness May 2020 @@ -109,7 +109,7 @@ Table of Contents -Bush, et al. Expires November 7, 2020 [Page 2] +Bush, et al. Expires November 8, 2020 [Page 2] Internet-Draft Layer 3 Discovery and Liveness May 2020 @@ -165,7 +165,7 @@ Internet-Draft Layer 3 Discovery and Liveness May 2020 -Bush, et al. Expires November 7, 2020 [Page 3] +Bush, et al. Expires November 8, 2020 [Page 3] Internet-Draft Layer 3 Discovery and Liveness May 2020 @@ -221,7 +221,7 @@ Internet-Draft Layer 3 Discovery and Liveness May 2020 -Bush, et al. Expires November 7, 2020 [Page 4] +Bush, et al. Expires November 8, 2020 [Page 4] Internet-Draft Layer 3 Discovery and Liveness May 2020 @@ -277,7 +277,7 @@ Internet-Draft Layer 3 Discovery and Liveness May 2020 -Bush, et al. Expires November 7, 2020 [Page 5] +Bush, et al. Expires November 8, 2020 [Page 5] Internet-Draft Layer 3 Discovery and Liveness May 2020 @@ -333,7 +333,7 @@ Internet-Draft Layer 3 Discovery and Liveness May 2020 -Bush, et al. Expires November 7, 2020 [Page 6] +Bush, et al. Expires November 8, 2020 [Page 6] Internet-Draft Layer 3 Discovery and Liveness May 2020 @@ -389,7 +389,7 @@ Internet-Draft Layer 3 Discovery and Liveness May 2020 -Bush, et al. Expires November 7, 2020 [Page 7] +Bush, et al. Expires November 8, 2020 [Page 7] Internet-Draft Layer 3 Discovery and Liveness May 2020 @@ -445,7 +445,7 @@ Internet-Draft Layer 3 Discovery and Liveness May 2020 -Bush, et al. Expires November 7, 2020 [Page 8] +Bush, et al. Expires November 8, 2020 [Page 8] Internet-Draft Layer 3 Discovery and Liveness May 2020 @@ -501,7 +501,7 @@ Internet-Draft Layer 3 Discovery and Liveness May 2020 -Bush, et al. Expires November 7, 2020 [Page 9] +Bush, et al. Expires November 8, 2020 [Page 9] Internet-Draft Layer 3 Discovery and Liveness May 2020 @@ -557,7 +557,7 @@ Internet-Draft Layer 3 Discovery and Liveness May 2020 -Bush, et al. Expires November 7, 2020 [Page 10] +Bush, et al. Expires November 8, 2020 [Page 10] Internet-Draft Layer 3 Discovery and Liveness May 2020 @@ -613,7 +613,7 @@ Internet-Draft Layer 3 Discovery and Liveness May 2020 -Bush, et al. Expires November 7, 2020 [Page 11] +Bush, et al. Expires November 8, 2020 [Page 11] Internet-Draft Layer 3 Discovery and Liveness May 2020 @@ -669,7 +669,7 @@ Internet-Draft Layer 3 Discovery and Liveness May 2020 -Bush, et al. Expires November 7, 2020 [Page 12] +Bush, et al. Expires November 8, 2020 [Page 12] Internet-Draft Layer 3 Discovery and Liveness May 2020 @@ -725,7 +725,7 @@ Internet-Draft Layer 3 Discovery and Liveness May 2020 -Bush, et al. Expires November 7, 2020 [Page 13] +Bush, et al. Expires November 8, 2020 [Page 13] Internet-Draft Layer 3 Discovery and Liveness May 2020 @@ -781,7 +781,7 @@ Internet-Draft Layer 3 Discovery and Liveness May 2020 -Bush, et al. Expires November 7, 2020 [Page 14] +Bush, et al. Expires November 8, 2020 [Page 14] Internet-Draft Layer 3 Discovery and Liveness May 2020 @@ -837,7 +837,7 @@ Internet-Draft Layer 3 Discovery and Liveness May 2020 -Bush, et al. Expires November 7, 2020 [Page 15] +Bush, et al. Expires November 8, 2020 [Page 15] Internet-Draft Layer 3 Discovery and Liveness May 2020 @@ -893,7 +893,7 @@ Internet-Draft Layer 3 Discovery and Liveness May 2020 -Bush, et al. Expires November 7, 2020 [Page 16] +Bush, et al. Expires November 8, 2020 [Page 16] Internet-Draft Layer 3 Discovery and Liveness May 2020 @@ -949,7 +949,7 @@ Internet-Draft Layer 3 Discovery and Liveness May 2020 -Bush, et al. Expires November 7, 2020 [Page 17] +Bush, et al. Expires November 8, 2020 [Page 17] Internet-Draft Layer 3 Discovery and Liveness May 2020 @@ -979,15 +979,15 @@ Internet-Draft Layer 3 Discovery and Liveness May 2020 an unacknowledged OPEN PDU, like other ACKed PDUs, SHOULD use exponential back-off, see [RFC1122]. - If a properly authenticated OPEN arrives with a new Nonce from an - LLEI with which the receiving logical link endpoint believes it - already has an L3DL session (OPENs have already been exchanged), and - the Serial Number in the OPEN PDU is non-zero, the receiver SHOULD - establish a new session by sending an OPEN with the Serial Number - being the same as that of the last sent and ACKed PDU. Each party - MUST resume sending encapsulations etc. subsequent to the other - party's Sequence Number. And each MUST retain all previously - discovered encapsulation and other data. + If a properly authenticated OPEN arrives at L3DL speaker A with a new + Nonce from an LLEI, speaker B, with which A believes it already has + an L3DL session (OPENs have already been exchanged), and the Serial + Number in the OPEN PDU is non-zero, speaker A SHOULD establish a new + session by sending an OPEN with the Serial Number being the same as + that of A's last sent and ACKed PDU. Each party MUST resume sending + encapsulations etc. subsequent to the other party's Sequence Number. + And each MUST retain all previously discovered encapsulation and + other data. If a properly authenticated OPEN arrives with a new Nonce from an LLEI with which the receiving logical link endpoint believes it @@ -1005,7 +1005,7 @@ Internet-Draft Layer 3 Discovery and Liveness May 2020 -Bush, et al. Expires November 7, 2020 [Page 18] +Bush, et al. Expires November 8, 2020 [Page 18] Internet-Draft Layer 3 Discovery and Liveness May 2020 @@ -1061,7 +1061,7 @@ Internet-Draft Layer 3 Discovery and Liveness May 2020 -Bush, et al. Expires November 7, 2020 [Page 19] +Bush, et al. Expires November 8, 2020 [Page 19] Internet-Draft Layer 3 Discovery and Liveness May 2020 @@ -1117,7 +1117,7 @@ Internet-Draft Layer 3 Discovery and Liveness May 2020 -Bush, et al. Expires November 7, 2020 [Page 20] +Bush, et al. Expires November 8, 2020 [Page 20] Internet-Draft Layer 3 Discovery and Liveness May 2020 @@ -1173,7 +1173,7 @@ Internet-Draft Layer 3 Discovery and Liveness May 2020 -Bush, et al. Expires November 7, 2020 [Page 21] +Bush, et al. Expires November 8, 2020 [Page 21] Internet-Draft Layer 3 Discovery and Liveness May 2020 @@ -1229,7 +1229,7 @@ Internet-Draft Layer 3 Discovery and Liveness May 2020 -Bush, et al. Expires November 7, 2020 [Page 22] +Bush, et al. Expires November 8, 2020 [Page 22] Internet-Draft Layer 3 Discovery and Liveness May 2020 @@ -1285,7 +1285,7 @@ Internet-Draft Layer 3 Discovery and Liveness May 2020 -Bush, et al. Expires November 7, 2020 [Page 23] +Bush, et al. Expires November 8, 2020 [Page 23] Internet-Draft Layer 3 Discovery and Liveness May 2020 @@ -1341,7 +1341,7 @@ Internet-Draft Layer 3 Discovery and Liveness May 2020 -Bush, et al. Expires November 7, 2020 [Page 24] +Bush, et al. Expires November 8, 2020 [Page 24] Internet-Draft Layer 3 Discovery and Liveness May 2020 @@ -1397,7 +1397,7 @@ Internet-Draft Layer 3 Discovery and Liveness May 2020 -Bush, et al. Expires November 7, 2020 [Page 25] +Bush, et al. Expires November 8, 2020 [Page 25] Internet-Draft Layer 3 Discovery and Liveness May 2020 @@ -1453,7 +1453,7 @@ Internet-Draft Layer 3 Discovery and Liveness May 2020 -Bush, et al. Expires November 7, 2020 [Page 26] +Bush, et al. Expires November 8, 2020 [Page 26] Internet-Draft Layer 3 Discovery and Liveness May 2020 @@ -1509,7 +1509,7 @@ Internet-Draft Layer 3 Discovery and Liveness May 2020 -Bush, et al. Expires November 7, 2020 [Page 27] +Bush, et al. Expires November 8, 2020 [Page 27] Internet-Draft Layer 3 Discovery and Liveness May 2020 @@ -1565,7 +1565,7 @@ Internet-Draft Layer 3 Discovery and Liveness May 2020 -Bush, et al. Expires November 7, 2020 [Page 28] +Bush, et al. Expires November 8, 2020 [Page 28] Internet-Draft Layer 3 Discovery and Liveness May 2020 @@ -1621,7 +1621,7 @@ Internet-Draft Layer 3 Discovery and Liveness May 2020 -Bush, et al. Expires November 7, 2020 [Page 29] +Bush, et al. Expires November 8, 2020 [Page 29] Internet-Draft Layer 3 Discovery and Liveness May 2020 @@ -1677,7 +1677,7 @@ Internet-Draft Layer 3 Discovery and Liveness May 2020 -Bush, et al. Expires November 7, 2020 [Page 30] +Bush, et al. Expires November 8, 2020 [Page 30] Internet-Draft Layer 3 Discovery and Liveness May 2020 @@ -1733,7 +1733,7 @@ Internet-Draft Layer 3 Discovery and Liveness May 2020 -Bush, et al. Expires November 7, 2020 [Page 31] +Bush, et al. Expires November 8, 2020 [Page 31] Internet-Draft Layer 3 Discovery and Liveness May 2020 @@ -1789,7 +1789,7 @@ Internet-Draft Layer 3 Discovery and Liveness May 2020 -Bush, et al. Expires November 7, 2020 [Page 32] +Bush, et al. Expires November 8, 2020 [Page 32] Internet-Draft Layer 3 Discovery and Liveness May 2020 @@ -1845,7 +1845,7 @@ Internet-Draft Layer 3 Discovery and Liveness May 2020 -Bush, et al. Expires November 7, 2020 [Page 33] +Bush, et al. Expires November 8, 2020 [Page 33] Internet-Draft Layer 3 Discovery and Liveness May 2020 @@ -1901,7 +1901,7 @@ Internet-Draft Layer 3 Discovery and Liveness May 2020 -Bush, et al. Expires November 7, 2020 [Page 34] +Bush, et al. Expires November 8, 2020 [Page 34] Internet-Draft Layer 3 Discovery and Liveness May 2020 @@ -1957,4 +1957,4 @@ Authors' Addresses -Bush, et al. Expires November 7, 2020 [Page 35] +Bush, et al. Expires November 8, 2020 [Page 35] diff --git a/draft-ietf-lsvr-l3dl.xml b/draft-ietf-lsvr-l3dl.xml index 13a96b1..44663f2 100644 --- a/draft-ietf-lsvr-l3dl.xml +++ b/draft-ietf-lsvr-l3dl.xml @@ -863,12 +863,12 @@ q--> an unacknowledged OPEN PDU, like other ACKed PDUs, SHOULD use exponential back-off, see . - If a properly authenticated OPEN arrives with a new Nonce from an - LLEI with which the receiving logical link endpoint believes it - already has an L3DL session (OPENs have already been exchanged), and - the Serial Number in the OPEN PDU is non-zero, the receiver SHOULD + If a properly authenticated OPEN arrives at L3DL speaker A with a + new Nonce from an LLEI, speaker B, with which A believes it already + has an L3DL session (OPENs have already been exchanged), and the + Serial Number in the OPEN PDU is non-zero, speaker A SHOULD establish a new session by sending an OPEN with the Serial Number - being the same as that of the last sent and ACKed PDU. Each party + being the same as that of A's last sent and ACKed PDU. Each party MUST resume sending encapsulations etc. subsequent to the other party's Sequence Number. And each MUST retain all previously discovered encapsulation and other data.