diff --git a/draft-ietf-lsvr-l3dl.txt b/draft-ietf-lsvr-l3dl.txt index c2df306..de97f5b 100644 --- a/draft-ietf-lsvr-l3dl.txt +++ b/draft-ietf-lsvr-l3dl.txt @@ -5,9 +5,9 @@ Network Working Group R. Bush Internet-Draft Arrcus & Internet Initiative Japan Intended status: Standards Track R. Austein -Expires: November 8, 2020 K. Patel +Expires: November 24, 2020 K. Patel Arrcus - May 7, 2020 + May 23, 2020 Layer 3 Discovery and Liveness @@ -46,14 +46,14 @@ Status of This Memo time. It is inappropriate to use Internet-Drafts as reference material or to cite them other than as "work in progress." - This Internet-Draft will expire on November 8, 2020. + This Internet-Draft will expire on November 24, 2020. -Bush, et al. Expires November 8, 2020 [Page 1] +Bush, et al. Expires November 24, 2020 [Page 1] Internet-Draft Layer 3 Discovery and Liveness May 2020 @@ -109,7 +109,7 @@ Table of Contents -Bush, et al. Expires November 8, 2020 [Page 2] +Bush, et al. Expires November 24, 2020 [Page 2] Internet-Draft Layer 3 Discovery and Liveness May 2020 @@ -165,7 +165,7 @@ Internet-Draft Layer 3 Discovery and Liveness May 2020 -Bush, et al. Expires November 8, 2020 [Page 3] +Bush, et al. Expires November 24, 2020 [Page 3] Internet-Draft Layer 3 Discovery and Liveness May 2020 @@ -221,7 +221,7 @@ Internet-Draft Layer 3 Discovery and Liveness May 2020 -Bush, et al. Expires November 8, 2020 [Page 4] +Bush, et al. Expires November 24, 2020 [Page 4] Internet-Draft Layer 3 Discovery and Liveness May 2020 @@ -277,7 +277,7 @@ Internet-Draft Layer 3 Discovery and Liveness May 2020 -Bush, et al. Expires November 8, 2020 [Page 5] +Bush, et al. Expires November 24, 2020 [Page 5] Internet-Draft Layer 3 Discovery and Liveness May 2020 @@ -333,7 +333,7 @@ Internet-Draft Layer 3 Discovery and Liveness May 2020 -Bush, et al. Expires November 8, 2020 [Page 6] +Bush, et al. Expires November 24, 2020 [Page 6] Internet-Draft Layer 3 Discovery and Liveness May 2020 @@ -389,7 +389,7 @@ Internet-Draft Layer 3 Discovery and Liveness May 2020 -Bush, et al. Expires November 8, 2020 [Page 7] +Bush, et al. Expires November 24, 2020 [Page 7] Internet-Draft Layer 3 Discovery and Liveness May 2020 @@ -445,7 +445,7 @@ Internet-Draft Layer 3 Discovery and Liveness May 2020 -Bush, et al. Expires November 8, 2020 [Page 8] +Bush, et al. Expires November 24, 2020 [Page 8] Internet-Draft Layer 3 Discovery and Liveness May 2020 @@ -501,7 +501,7 @@ Internet-Draft Layer 3 Discovery and Liveness May 2020 -Bush, et al. Expires November 8, 2020 [Page 9] +Bush, et al. Expires November 24, 2020 [Page 9] Internet-Draft Layer 3 Discovery and Liveness May 2020 @@ -557,7 +557,7 @@ Internet-Draft Layer 3 Discovery and Liveness May 2020 -Bush, et al. Expires November 8, 2020 [Page 10] +Bush, et al. Expires November 24, 2020 [Page 10] Internet-Draft Layer 3 Discovery and Liveness May 2020 @@ -581,7 +581,8 @@ Internet-Draft Layer 3 Discovery and Liveness May 2020 deployment. Sum up 32-bit unsigned ints in a 64-bit long, then take the high- - order section, shift it right, rotate, add it in, repeat until zero. + order section, shift it right filling on the left with zeros, rotate, + add it in, repeat until the high order 32 bits are all zero. @@ -612,8 +613,7 @@ Internet-Draft Layer 3 Discovery and Liveness May 2020 - -Bush, et al. Expires November 8, 2020 [Page 11] +Bush, et al. Expires November 24, 2020 [Page 11] Internet-Draft Layer 3 Discovery and Liveness May 2020 @@ -669,7 +669,7 @@ Internet-Draft Layer 3 Discovery and Liveness May 2020 -Bush, et al. Expires November 8, 2020 [Page 12] +Bush, et al. Expires November 24, 2020 [Page 12] Internet-Draft Layer 3 Discovery and Liveness May 2020 @@ -725,7 +725,7 @@ Internet-Draft Layer 3 Discovery and Liveness May 2020 -Bush, et al. Expires November 8, 2020 [Page 13] +Bush, et al. Expires November 24, 2020 [Page 13] Internet-Draft Layer 3 Discovery and Liveness May 2020 @@ -781,7 +781,7 @@ Internet-Draft Layer 3 Discovery and Liveness May 2020 -Bush, et al. Expires November 8, 2020 [Page 14] +Bush, et al. Expires November 24, 2020 [Page 14] Internet-Draft Layer 3 Discovery and Liveness May 2020 @@ -837,7 +837,7 @@ Internet-Draft Layer 3 Discovery and Liveness May 2020 -Bush, et al. Expires November 8, 2020 [Page 15] +Bush, et al. Expires November 24, 2020 [Page 15] Internet-Draft Layer 3 Discovery and Liveness May 2020 @@ -893,7 +893,7 @@ Internet-Draft Layer 3 Discovery and Liveness May 2020 -Bush, et al. Expires November 8, 2020 [Page 16] +Bush, et al. Expires November 24, 2020 [Page 16] Internet-Draft Layer 3 Discovery and Liveness May 2020 @@ -949,7 +949,7 @@ Internet-Draft Layer 3 Discovery and Liveness May 2020 -Bush, et al. Expires November 8, 2020 [Page 17] +Bush, et al. Expires November 24, 2020 [Page 17] Internet-Draft Layer 3 Discovery and Liveness May 2020 @@ -958,6 +958,10 @@ Internet-Draft Layer 3 Discovery and Liveness May 2020 authenticate is a failure to start the L3DL session, an ERROR PDU MUST BE sent (Error Code 3), and HELLOs MUST be restarted. + Although delay and jitter in responding with an OPEN were specified + above, beware of load created by long strings of authentication + failures and retries. + The Serial Number is that of the last received and processed PDU. This allows a receiver sending an OPEN to tell the sender that the receiver wants to resume a session and the sender only needs to send @@ -1001,11 +1005,7 @@ Internet-Draft Layer 3 Discovery and Liveness May 2020 - - - - -Bush, et al. Expires November 8, 2020 [Page 18] +Bush, et al. Expires November 24, 2020 [Page 18] Internet-Draft Layer 3 Discovery and Liveness May 2020 @@ -1061,7 +1061,7 @@ Internet-Draft Layer 3 Discovery and Liveness May 2020 -Bush, et al. Expires November 8, 2020 [Page 19] +Bush, et al. Expires November 24, 2020 [Page 19] Internet-Draft Layer 3 Discovery and Liveness May 2020 @@ -1117,7 +1117,7 @@ Internet-Draft Layer 3 Discovery and Liveness May 2020 -Bush, et al. Expires November 8, 2020 [Page 20] +Bush, et al. Expires November 24, 2020 [Page 20] Internet-Draft Layer 3 Discovery and Liveness May 2020 @@ -1173,7 +1173,7 @@ Internet-Draft Layer 3 Discovery and Liveness May 2020 -Bush, et al. Expires November 8, 2020 [Page 21] +Bush, et al. Expires November 24, 2020 [Page 21] Internet-Draft Layer 3 Discovery and Liveness May 2020 @@ -1229,7 +1229,7 @@ Internet-Draft Layer 3 Discovery and Liveness May 2020 -Bush, et al. Expires November 8, 2020 [Page 22] +Bush, et al. Expires November 24, 2020 [Page 22] Internet-Draft Layer 3 Discovery and Liveness May 2020 @@ -1285,7 +1285,7 @@ Internet-Draft Layer 3 Discovery and Liveness May 2020 -Bush, et al. Expires November 8, 2020 [Page 23] +Bush, et al. Expires November 24, 2020 [Page 23] Internet-Draft Layer 3 Discovery and Liveness May 2020 @@ -1341,7 +1341,7 @@ Internet-Draft Layer 3 Discovery and Liveness May 2020 -Bush, et al. Expires November 8, 2020 [Page 24] +Bush, et al. Expires November 24, 2020 [Page 24] Internet-Draft Layer 3 Discovery and Liveness May 2020 @@ -1397,7 +1397,7 @@ Internet-Draft Layer 3 Discovery and Liveness May 2020 -Bush, et al. Expires November 8, 2020 [Page 25] +Bush, et al. Expires November 24, 2020 [Page 25] Internet-Draft Layer 3 Discovery and Liveness May 2020 @@ -1453,7 +1453,7 @@ Internet-Draft Layer 3 Discovery and Liveness May 2020 -Bush, et al. Expires November 8, 2020 [Page 26] +Bush, et al. Expires November 24, 2020 [Page 26] Internet-Draft Layer 3 Discovery and Liveness May 2020 @@ -1509,7 +1509,7 @@ Internet-Draft Layer 3 Discovery and Liveness May 2020 -Bush, et al. Expires November 8, 2020 [Page 27] +Bush, et al. Expires November 24, 2020 [Page 27] Internet-Draft Layer 3 Discovery and Liveness May 2020 @@ -1565,7 +1565,7 @@ Internet-Draft Layer 3 Discovery and Liveness May 2020 -Bush, et al. Expires November 8, 2020 [Page 28] +Bush, et al. Expires November 24, 2020 [Page 28] Internet-Draft Layer 3 Discovery and Liveness May 2020 @@ -1621,7 +1621,7 @@ Internet-Draft Layer 3 Discovery and Liveness May 2020 -Bush, et al. Expires November 8, 2020 [Page 29] +Bush, et al. Expires November 24, 2020 [Page 29] Internet-Draft Layer 3 Discovery and Liveness May 2020 @@ -1677,7 +1677,7 @@ Internet-Draft Layer 3 Discovery and Liveness May 2020 -Bush, et al. Expires November 8, 2020 [Page 30] +Bush, et al. Expires November 24, 2020 [Page 30] Internet-Draft Layer 3 Discovery and Liveness May 2020 @@ -1733,7 +1733,7 @@ Internet-Draft Layer 3 Discovery and Liveness May 2020 -Bush, et al. Expires November 8, 2020 [Page 31] +Bush, et al. Expires November 24, 2020 [Page 31] Internet-Draft Layer 3 Discovery and Liveness May 2020 @@ -1789,7 +1789,7 @@ Internet-Draft Layer 3 Discovery and Liveness May 2020 -Bush, et al. Expires November 8, 2020 [Page 32] +Bush, et al. Expires November 24, 2020 [Page 32] Internet-Draft Layer 3 Discovery and Liveness May 2020 @@ -1797,7 +1797,7 @@ Internet-Draft Layer 3 Discovery and Liveness May 2020 [I-D.ietf-lsvr-bgp-spf] Patel, K., Lindem, A., Zandi, S., and W. Henderickx, "Shortest Path Routing Extensions for BGP Protocol", - draft-ietf-lsvr-bgp-spf-08 (work in progress), March 2020. + draft-ietf-lsvr-bgp-spf-09 (work in progress), May 2020. [I-D.ymbk-lsvr-l3dl-signing] Bush, R. and R. Austein, "Layer 3 Discovery and Liveness @@ -1845,7 +1845,7 @@ Internet-Draft Layer 3 Discovery and Liveness May 2020 -Bush, et al. Expires November 8, 2020 [Page 33] +Bush, et al. Expires November 24, 2020 [Page 33] Internet-Draft Layer 3 Discovery and Liveness May 2020 @@ -1901,7 +1901,7 @@ Internet-Draft Layer 3 Discovery and Liveness May 2020 -Bush, et al. Expires November 8, 2020 [Page 34] +Bush, et al. Expires November 24, 2020 [Page 34] Internet-Draft Layer 3 Discovery and Liveness May 2020 @@ -1957,4 +1957,4 @@ Authors' Addresses -Bush, et al. Expires November 8, 2020 [Page 35] +Bush, et al. Expires November 24, 2020 [Page 35] diff --git a/draft-ietf-lsvr-l3dl.xml b/draft-ietf-lsvr-l3dl.xml index 73786aa..4c7c65d 100644 --- a/draft-ietf-lsvr-l3dl.xml +++ b/draft-ietf-lsvr-l3dl.xml @@ -505,8 +505,9 @@
Sum up 32-bit unsigned ints in a 64-bit long, then take - the high-order section, shift it right, rotate, add it in, repeat - until zero. + the high-order section, shift it right filling on the left with + zeros, rotate, add it in, repeat until the high order 32 bits are + all zero. authenticate is a failure to start the L3DL session, an ERROR PDU MUST BE sent (Error Code 3), and HELLOs MUST be restarted. + Although delay and jitter in responding with an OPEN were + specified above, beware of load created by long strings of + authentication failures and retries. + The Serial Number is that of the last received and processed PDU. This allows a receiver sending an OPEN to tell the sender that the receiver wants to resume a session and the sender only needs to send