From 02ce25040f297ac1614c303cda896d8a59cc43f5 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Randy Bush <randy@psg.com>
Date: Wed, 30 Apr 2025 15:27:41 -0700
Subject: [PATCH] -15 published after secdir review

---
 draft-ietf-lsvr-l3dl.xml | 9 +--------
 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 8 deletions(-)

diff --git a/draft-ietf-lsvr-l3dl.xml b/draft-ietf-lsvr-l3dl.xml
index a29c095..4fb9750 100644
--- a/draft-ietf-lsvr-l3dl.xml
+++ b/draft-ietf-lsvr-l3dl.xml
@@ -19,13 +19,6 @@
     <author fullname="Randy Bush" initials="R." surname="Bush">
       <organization>Arrcus &amp; IIJ Research Lab</organization>
       <address>
-        <postal>
-          <street>5147 Crystal Springs</street>
-          <city>Bainbridge Island</city>
-          <region>WA</region>
-          <code>98110</code>
-          <country>US</country>
-          </postal>
         <email>randy@psg.com</email>
       </address>
     </author>
@@ -2354,7 +2347,7 @@ uint32_t sbox_checksum_32(const uint8_t *b, const size_t n)
     <t>The NEWKEY PDU is open to abuse to create a signature algorithm
     or Auth Type downgrade attack.</t>
 
-    <t>If L3DL is used in a WAN deployment, as opposed to tightly
+    <t>If L3DL is used in a WAN deployment, as opposed to more tightly
     controlled data center, the use SHOULD be restricted to iBGP peers
     and/or eBGP confederations within the operator's scope of trust.
     And, because of tapping and interception threats, the PKI-based