diff --git a/draft-ietf-lsvr-l3dl.xml b/draft-ietf-lsvr-l3dl.xml
index a29c095..4fb9750 100644
--- a/draft-ietf-lsvr-l3dl.xml
+++ b/draft-ietf-lsvr-l3dl.xml
@@ -19,13 +19,6 @@
Arrcus & IIJ Research Lab
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- 5147 Crystal Springs
- Bainbridge Island
- WA
- 98110
- US
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randy@psg.com
@@ -2354,7 +2347,7 @@ uint32_t sbox_checksum_32(const uint8_t *b, const size_t n)
The NEWKEY PDU is open to abuse to create a signature algorithm
or Auth Type downgrade attack.
- If L3DL is used in a WAN deployment, as opposed to tightly
+ If L3DL is used in a WAN deployment, as opposed to more tightly
controlled data center, the use SHOULD be restricted to iBGP peers
and/or eBGP confederations within the operator's scope of trust.
And, because of tapping and interception threats, the PKI-based