From 785738788f4df950086b33b70aa635863138a456 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Randy Bush Date: Thu, 3 Oct 2019 15:06:34 -0700 Subject: [PATCH] full pass fixing lsor refs and some adjustments to new l3dl changes --- draft-ymbk-lsvr-l3dl-signing.xml | 20 ++++++++++---------- 1 file changed, 10 insertions(+), 10 deletions(-) diff --git a/draft-ymbk-lsvr-l3dl-signing.xml b/draft-ymbk-lsvr-l3dl-signing.xml index a8e1e22..5221d7c 100644 --- a/draft-ymbk-lsvr-l3dl-signing.xml +++ b/draft-ymbk-lsvr-l3dl-signing.xml @@ -58,12 +58,12 @@ - The Layer 3 Discovery and Liveness protocol OPEN PDU contains a - key and a certificate, which can be used to verify signatures on + The Layer 3 Discovery and Liveness protocol OPEN PDU may contain + a key and a certificate, which can be used to verify signatures on subsequent PDUs. This document describes two mechanisms based on digital signatures, one that is Trust On First Use (TOFU), and one - that uses certificates to provide authentication as well as - session integrity. + that uses certificates to provide authentication as well as session + integrity. @@ -84,7 +84,7 @@
The Layer 3 Discovery and Liveness protocol [old ref because - new draft not yet pushed] OPEN + new draft not yet pushed] OPEN PDU contains an algorithm specifier, a key, and a certificate, which can be used to verify signatures on subsequent PDUs. This document describes two methods of key generation and signing for @@ -387,9 +387,9 @@ Modern key management allows for agility in 'rolling' to a new key or even algorithm in case of key expiry, key compromise, or merely prudence. Declaring a new key with an L3DL OPEN PDU would - cause serious churn in topology as a new OPEN causes a withdraw of - previously announced encapsulations. Therefore, a gentler rekeying - is needed. + cause serious churn in topology as a new OPEN may cause a withdraw + of previously announced encapsulations. Therefore, a gentler + rekeying is needed.