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6man N. Bourbaki 6man N. Bourbaki
Internet-Draft The Intertubes Internet-Draft The Intertubes
Updates: 4291 (if approved) July 18, 2017 Updates: 4291 (if approved) July 19, 2017
Intended status: Standards Track Intended status: Standards Track
Expires: January 19, 2018 Expires: January 20, 2018
IPv6 is Classless IPv6 is Classless
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time. It is inappropriate to use Internet-Drafts as reference time. It is inappropriate to use Internet-Drafts as reference
material or to cite them other than as "work in progress." material or to cite them other than as "work in progress."
This Internet-Draft will expire on January 19, 2018. This Internet-Draft will expire on January 20, 2018.
Copyright Notice Copyright Notice
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Hierarchical allocation of fixed-length subnets requires Hierarchical allocation of fixed-length subnets requires
coordination between lower / intermediate / upper network coordination between lower / intermediate / upper network
elementss. It has implict assumption that policies and size elements. It has implicit assumption that policies and size
allocation allowed the top of the hierarchy will accomodate allocation allowed the top of the hierarchy will accommodate
present and future use cases with fixed lenth subnet allocation. present and future use cases with fixed length subnet allocation.
Coordination with upstream networks across administrative domains Coordination with upstream networks across administrative domains
for the allocation of fixed length subnets reveals topology and for the allocation of fixed length subnets reveals topology and
intent that may be private in scope. Policies for hierarchical intent that may be private in scope. Policies for hierarchical
allcation are applied top-down and amount to permission to build a allocation are applied top-down and amount to permission to build
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particular topology (for example mobile device tethering, virtual a particular topology (for example mobile device tethering,
machine instantiation, containers and so on). virtual machine instantiation, containers and so on).
4. Identifier and Subnet Length Statements 4. Identifier and Subnet Length Statements
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favor portability of devices and operating systems. favor portability of devices and operating systems.
Nonetheless, there is no reason in theory why an IPv6 node should not Nonetheless, there is no reason in theory why an IPv6 node should not
operate with different interface identfier lengths on different operate with different interface identifier lengths on different
physical interfaces. Thus, a correct implementation of SLAAC must in physical interfaces. Thus, a correct implementation of SLAAC must in
fact allow for any prefix length, with the value being a parameter fact allow for any prefix length, with the value being a parameter
per interface. For instance, the Interface Identifier length in the per interface. For instance, the Interface Identifier length in the
recommended (see [RFC8064]) algorithm for selecting stable interface recommended (see [RFC8064]) algorithm for selecting stable interface
identifiers [RFC7217] is a parameter, rather than a hardcoded value. identifiers [RFC7217] is a parameter, rather than a hard-coded value.
6. Security Considerations 6. Security Considerations
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