diff --git a/draft-nbourbaki-6man-classless-ipv6.xml b/draft-nbourbaki-6man-classless-ipv6.xml
index a0fa14e..4faa90a 100644
--- a/draft-nbourbaki-6man-classless-ipv6.xml
+++ b/draft-nbourbaki-6man-classless-ipv6.xml
@@ -20,7 +20,7 @@
The Intertubes
- 42 Rue le Jour
+ 42 Rue du Jour
Sophia-Antipolis
::1
@@ -36,8 +36,8 @@
Over the history of IPv6, there have been many classful address
models; TLA and NLA being outstanding examples. They have all been
- shown to be mistakes. The last is a magic boundary at /64. This
- document removes that last bit of useless magic.
+ shown to be mistakes. The last remaining is a magic boundary at
+ /64. This document removes that last bit of useless magic.
@@ -49,8 +49,8 @@
Over the history of IPv6, there have been many classful address
models; TLA and NLA being outstanding examples. They have all been
- shown to be mistakes. The last is a magic boundary at /64. This
- document removes that last bit of useless magic.
+ shown to be mistakes. The last remaining is a magic boundary at
+ /64. This document removes that last bit of useless magic.
@@ -80,7 +80,7 @@
In the meantime, link prefixes of varied lengths, /127, /126,
/124, /120, ... /64 have been successfully deployed for many years.
Having the formal specification be unclear risks potential
- mis-implementation by the naive, which coulf result in operational
+ mis-implementation by the naive, which could result in operational
disasters.
@@ -104,8 +104,8 @@
Configuration, is a parameter; its length
needs to be sufficient for effective randomization for privacy
reasons. For example, a /48 would be sufficient. But we recommend,
- barring strong considerations to the contrary, using 64-bits in
- order not to discover where 64-bits was hard-coded.
+ barring strong considerations to the contrary, using 64-bits for
+ SLAAC in order not to discover where 64-bits was hard-coded.