diff --git a/draft-nbourbaki-6man-classless-ipv6.xml b/draft-nbourbaki-6man-classless-ipv6.xml index 6c6646e..9b01e81 100644 --- a/draft-nbourbaki-6man-classless-ipv6.xml +++ b/draft-nbourbaki-6man-classless-ipv6.xml @@ -162,15 +162,15 @@ rate is low enough. Hierarchical allocation of fixed-length subnets requires coordination between lower / intermediate / upper network - elementss. It has implict assumption that policies and size - allocation allowed the top of the hierarchy will accomodate - present and future use cases with fixed lenth subnet + elements. It has implicit assumption that policies and size + allocation allowed the top of the hierarchy will accommodate + present and future use cases with fixed length subnet allocation. Coordination with upstream networks across administrative domains for the allocation of fixed length subnets reveals topology and intent that may be private in scope. Policies for - hierarchical allcation are applied top-down and amount to + hierarchical allocation are applied top-down and amount to permission to build a particular topology (for example mobile device tethering, virtual machine instantiation, containers and so on). @@ -228,13 +228,13 @@ rate is low enough. systems. Nonetheless, there is no reason in theory why an IPv6 node should - not operate with different interface identfier lengths on different + not operate with different interface identifier lengths on different physical interfaces. Thus, a correct implementation of SLAAC must in fact allow for any prefix length, with the value being a parameter per interface. For instance, the Interface Identifier length in the recommended (see ) algorithm for selecting stable interface identifiers - is a parameter, rather than a hardcoded value. + is a parameter, rather than a hard-coded value.