diff --git a/draft-ymbk-bgp-discovery-layers.txt b/draft-ymbk-bgp-discovery-layers.txt
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@@ -194,11 +194,17 @@ Internet-Draft Trade-offs in BGP Peer Discovery May 2020
[I-D.acee-idr-lldp-peer-discovery] describes how to use the LLDP IETF
Organizationally Specific TLV to augment the LLDP TLV set to
- transport BGP Config Sub-TLVs signaling AFI, IP address (IPv4 or
- IPv6), Local ASs, Local BGP Identifier (aka, BGP Router ID), Session
- Group-ID, BGP [Authentication] Session Capabilities, and Local
- Address (Next Hop). Which iof these are really necessary could be
- discussed.
+ transport BGP Config Sub-TLVs signaling
+
+ o AFI,
+ o IP address (IPv4 or IPv6),
+ o Local ASs,
+ o Local BGP Identifier (AKA, BGP Router ID),
+ o Session Group-ID,
+ o BGP [Authentication] Session Capabilities, and
+ o Local Address (Next Hop).
+
+ Which of these are really necessary could be discussed.
7.2. Layer-3 Discovery Protocol (L3dl)
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abilities, and link liveness which may then be disseminated using
BGP-SPF and similar protocols.
- This is similar but not quite the sane as the needs of this IDR
- Design Team. E.g., the result is likely more complex than is needed.
- A week's work could customize the design for the IDR Design Team's
- needs. But ...
-
- Unlike LLDP, L3DL has only one implementation and is not widely
- deployed.
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+ L3DL Upper Layer Protocol Configuration, [I-D.ymbk-lsvr-l3dl-ulpc],
+ details signaling the minimal set of parameters needed to start a BGP
+ session with a discovered peer. Details such as loopback peering are
+ handled by attributes in the L3DL protocol itself.
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+ o AS number,
+ o IP address, IPv4 or IPv6, and
+ o BGP Authentication.
+
+ This is similar but not quite the sane as the needs of this IDR
+ Design Team. E.g., L3DL is designed to meet more complex needs.
+ L3DL's reedecesor, LSOE, [I-D.ymbk-lsvr-lsoe], was simpler and might
+ be a better candidate for adaptation. A week's work could customize
+ the design for the IDR Design Team's needs. But ...
+
+ Unlike LLDP, L3DL has only one implementation, and LSOE only one open
+ source implementation, and neither is significantly deployed.
+
8. Discovery at Layer Three
Discovery at Layer-3 can assume IP addressability, though the IP
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Rendezvous approaches may appeal to deployments which favor a central
control framework.
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On the other hand, those who favor distributed protocols will have
the classic worries about fragility, redundancy, reliability, etc.
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The IDR BGP Discovery Design Team.
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12. IANA Considerations
None
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and Liveness", draft-ietf-lsvr-l3dl-04 (work in progress),
May 2020.
+ [I-D.ymbk-lsvr-l3dl-ulpc]
+ Bush, R. and K. Patel, "L3DL Upper Layer Protocol
+ Configuration", draft-ymbk-lsvr-l3dl-ulpc-03 (work in
+ progress), May 2020.
+
+ [I-D.ymbk-lsvr-lsoe]
+ Bush, R., Austein, R., and K. Patel, "Link State Over
+ Ethernet", draft-ymbk-lsvr-lsoe-03 (work in progress),
+ November 2018.
+
[RFC6830] Farinacci, D., Fuller, V., Meyer, D., and D. Lewis, "The
Locator/ID Separation Protocol (LISP)", RFC 6830,
DOI 10.17487/RFC6830, January 2013,
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diff --git a/draft-ymbk-bgp-discovery-layers.xml b/draft-ymbk-bgp-discovery-layers.xml
index 9021c02..c07d47a 100644
--- a/draft-ymbk-bgp-discovery-layers.xml
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@@ -277,11 +277,35 @@
describes how
to use the LLDP IETF Organizationally Specific TLV to augment
- the LLDP TLV set to transport BGP Config Sub-TLVs signaling AFI,
- IP address (IPv4 or IPv6), Local ASs, Local BGP Identifier (aka,
- BGP Router ID), Session Group-ID, BGP [Authentication] Session
- Capabilities, and Local Address (Next Hop). Which iof these are
- really necessary could be discussed.
+ the LLDP TLV set to transport BGP Config Sub-TLVs signaling
+
+
+
+
+ AFI,
+
+
+ IP address (IPv4 or IPv6),
+
+
+ Local ASs,
+
+
+ Local BGP Identifier (AKA, BGP Router ID),
+
+
+ Session Group-ID,
+
+
+ BGP [Authentication] Session Capabilities, and
+
+
+ Local Address (Next Hop).
+
+
+
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+ Which of these are really necessary could be discussed.
@@ -298,14 +322,38 @@
- This is similar but not quite the sane as the needs of this IDR
- Design Team. E.g., the result is likely more complex than is
- needed. A week's work could customize the design for the IDR
- Design Team's needs. But ...
+ L3DL Upper Layer Protocol Configuration, , details signaling the
+ minimal set of parameters needed to start a BGP session with a
+ discovered peer. Details such as loopback peering are handled
+ by attributes in the L3DL protocol itself.
+
+
+
+
+ AS number,
+
+
+ IP address, IPv4 or IPv6, and
+
+
+ BGP Authentication.
+
+
- Unlike LLDP, L3DL has only one implementation and is not widely
+ This is similar but not quite the sane as the needs of this IDR
+ Design Team. E.g., L3DL is designed to meet more complex needs.
+ L3DL's reedecesor, LSOE, ,
+ was simpler and might be a better candidate for adaptation. A
+ week's work could customize the design for the IDR Design Team's
+ needs. But ...
+
+
+
+ Unlike LLDP, L3DL has only one implementation, and LSOE only one
+ open source implementation, and neither is significantly
deployed.
@@ -406,6 +454,8 @@
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+