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draft-ymbk-bgp-discovery-layers.xml
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<section anchor="underlay" title="BGP is the Underlay">
<t>
The assumedenvironment has BGP used as the underlay routing
The assumed environment has BGP used as the underlay routing
protocol in data center.
</t>
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its loopback addresses for the BGP session endpoint.
</t>
<t>
Support discoverery of the peers' ASs.
Support discovery of the peers' ASs.
</t>
<t>
Agree on any BGP session authentication and parameters.
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<t>
Each one's attributes, a deployment defined set, e.g.: leaf,
spine, ice cream flavor, ... These attributes are arbitrary
and operator dependednt. No assumptions should be made, code
and operator dependent. No assumptions should be made, code
points assigned,, etc.
</t>
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<t>
This is similar but not quite the sane as the needs of this IDR
Design Team. E.g., L3DL is designed to meet more complex needs.
L3DL's reedecesor, LSOE, <xref target="I-D.ymbk-lsvr-lsoe"/>,
L3DL's predecessor, LSOE, <xref target="I-D.ymbk-lsvr-lsoe"/>,
was simpler and might be a better candidate for adaptation. A
week's work could customize the design for the IDR Design Team's
needs. But ...
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The principal problem would appear to be discovery at Layer-3,
because one neither knows whether to use IPv4 or IPv6. This is
exacerbated by the possibility of a potential peer not being on
the local subnet, and hence broadcast and simiar techniques may
the local subnet, and hence broadcast and similar techniques may
not be applicable.
</t>
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<section anchor="layer7" title="Discovery at Layer Seven">
<t>
Peer discovery at Layer-7 requires application layer rendezcous
Peer discovery at Layer-7 requires application layer rendezvous
mechanisms analogous to those used by LISP, <xref
target="RFC6830"/> or the Bitcoin Protocol.
</t>