diff --git a/draft-ymbk-bgp-discovery-layers.txt b/draft-ymbk-bgp-discovery-layers.txt
index 93e520d..cf1fb10 100644
--- a/draft-ymbk-bgp-discovery-layers.txt
+++ b/draft-ymbk-bgp-discovery-layers.txt
@@ -4,13 +4,12 @@
Network Working Group R. Bush
Internet-Draft Arrcus, Inc. & Internet Initiative Japan
-Updates: 6811 (if approved) May 27, 2020
-Intended status: Informational
-Expires: November 28, 2020
+Intended status: Informational January 15, 2021
+Expires: July 19, 2021
Trade-offs in BGP Peer Discovery
- draft-ymbk-bgp-discovery-layers-00
+ draft-ymbk-bgp-discovery-layers-01
Abstract
@@ -36,11 +35,11 @@ Status of This Memo
time. It is inappropriate to use Internet-Drafts as reference
material or to cite them other than as "work in progress."
- This Internet-Draft will expire on November 28, 2020.
+ This Internet-Draft will expire on July 19, 2021.
Copyright Notice
- Copyright (c) 2020 IETF Trust and the persons identified as the
+ Copyright (c) 2021 IETF Trust and the persons identified as the
document authors. All rights reserved.
This document is subject to BCP 78 and the IETF Trust's Legal
@@ -53,9 +52,10 @@ Copyright Notice
-Bush Expires November 28, 2020 [Page 1]
+
+Bush Expires July 19, 2021 [Page 1]
-Internet-Draft Trade-offs in BGP Peer Discovery May 2020
+Internet-Draft Trade-offs in BGP Peer Discovery January 2021
the Trust Legal Provisions and are provided without warranty as
@@ -78,7 +78,7 @@ Internet-Draft Trade-offs in BGP Peer Discovery May 2020
2.1. BGP is the Underlay
The assumed environment has BGP used as the underlay routing protocol
- in data center.
+ in a data center.
2.2. Some Requirements
@@ -109,9 +109,9 @@ Internet-Draft Trade-offs in BGP Peer Discovery May 2020
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3. Assumptions
@@ -165,9 +165,9 @@ Internet-Draft Trade-offs in BGP Peer Discovery May 2020
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+Bush Expires July 19, 2021 [Page 3]
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6. Success Criteria
@@ -221,9 +221,9 @@ Internet-Draft Trade-offs in BGP Peer Discovery May 2020
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+Bush Expires July 19, 2021 [Page 4]
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+Internet-Draft Trade-offs in BGP Peer Discovery January 2021
o AS number,
@@ -233,7 +233,7 @@ Internet-Draft Trade-offs in BGP Peer Discovery May 2020
L3DL and L3DL-ULPC have well-specified security mechanisms, see
[I-D.ietf-lsvr-l3dl-signing].
- This is similar but not quite the sane as the needs of this IDR
+ This is similar but not quite the same as the needs of this IDR
Design Team. E.g., L3DL is designed to meet more complex needs.
L3DL's predecessor, LSOE, [I-D.ietf-lsvr-lsoe], was simpler and might
be a better candidate for adaptation. A week's work could customize
@@ -277,9 +277,9 @@ Internet-Draft Trade-offs in BGP Peer Discovery May 2020
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+Bush Expires July 19, 2021 [Page 5]
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+Internet-Draft Trade-offs in BGP Peer Discovery January 2021
Rendezvous approaches may appeal to deployments which favor a central
@@ -305,13 +305,13 @@ Internet-Draft Trade-offs in BGP Peer Discovery May 2020
[I-D.acee-idr-lldp-peer-discovery]
Lindem, A., Patel, K., Zandi, S., Haas, J., and X. Xu,
"BGP Logical Link Discovery Protocol (LLDP) Peer
- Discovery", draft-acee-idr-lldp-peer-discovery-06 (work in
- progress), November 2019.
+ Discovery", draft-acee-idr-lldp-peer-discovery-08 (work in
+ progress), December 2020.
[I-D.ietf-lsvr-l3dl]
Bush, R., Austein, R., and K. Patel, "Layer 3 Discovery
- and Liveness", draft-ietf-lsvr-l3dl-04 (work in progress),
- May 2020.
+ and Liveness", draft-ietf-lsvr-l3dl-06 (work in progress),
+ July 2020.
[I-D.ietf-lsvr-l3dl-signing]
Bush, R. and R. Austein, "Layer 3 Discovery and Liveness
@@ -333,9 +333,9 @@ Internet-Draft Trade-offs in BGP Peer Discovery May 2020
-Bush Expires November 28, 2020 [Page 6]
+Bush Expires July 19, 2021 [Page 6]
-Internet-Draft Trade-offs in BGP Peer Discovery May 2020
+Internet-Draft Trade-offs in BGP Peer Discovery January 2021
[RFC6830] Farinacci, D., Fuller, V., Meyer, D., and D. Lewis, "The
@@ -389,4 +389,4 @@ Author's Address
-Bush Expires November 28, 2020 [Page 7]
+Bush Expires July 19, 2021 [Page 7]
diff --git a/draft-ymbk-bgp-discovery-layers.xml b/draft-ymbk-bgp-discovery-layers.xml
index d7de06e..5b0573b 100644
--- a/draft-ymbk-bgp-discovery-layers.xml
+++ b/draft-ymbk-bgp-discovery-layers.xml
@@ -74,7 +74,7 @@
The assumed environment has BGP used as the underlay routing
- protocol in data center.
+ protocol in a data center.
@@ -100,7 +100,7 @@
its loopback addresses for the BGP session endpoint.
- Support discovery of the peers' ASs.
+ Support discovery of the peers' ASs.
Agree on any BGP session authentication and parameters.