diff --git a/draft-ymbk-9092update.xml b/draft-ymbk-9092update.xml index ed3bf33..1756bdd 100644 --- a/draft-ymbk-9092update.xml +++ b/draft-ymbk-9092update.xml @@ -457,19 +457,19 @@ public RPKI, has the needed public key. - The appendix MUST be hidden as a series of "#" comments at the - end of the geofeed file. The following is a cryptographically - incorrect, albeit simple, example. A correct and full example is - in . + The appendix MUST be hidden as a series of "#" + comments at the end of the geofeed file. The following is a + cryptographically incorrect, albeit simple, example. A correct + and full example is in . The signature does not cover the signature lines. @@ -764,299 +764,214 @@ address blocks, all IPv6 address blocks, and all Autonomous System (AS) numbers. The CA certificate is issued by the trust anchor. This certificate grants authority over one IPv4 address block - (192.0.2.0/24) and two AS numbers (64496 and 64497). + (192.0.2.0/24), one IPv6 address block (2001:db8::/32), + and one AS numbers (64496). + - The end-entity certificate is issued by the CA. This - certificate grants signature authority for one IPv4 address block - (192.0.2.0/24). Signature authority for AS numbers is not needed for - geofeed data signatures, so no AS numbers are included in the - certificate. + The CRL 'root.crl' referenced by the above CA certificate. + + + The CRL '3C6B33E5709C073A868C95D955B0F56E37821D7B.crl' referenced by + the below EE certificate. + + The end-entity certificate is displayed below in detail. For brevity, the other two certificates are not. =+..a..... + 0070 - 10 69 1e 12 4f 54 e2 74-a0 b2 f9 59 37 0e 3c ea .i..OT.t...Y7.<. + 0080 - 66 a4 2f 97 5b ea 5b 90-ea 59 06 c8 9e 87 f4 cb f./.[.[..Y...... + 0090 - b2 24 62 24 f2 10 9c 79-85 0e 05 90 21 52 4a 76 .$b$...y....!RJv + 00a0 - 0e 24 0d f5 72 bd 8a 7c-94 44 31 86 1f 20 bb 02 .$..r..|.D1.. .. + 00b0 - 96 d7 29 bd fc 03 b2 28-94 65 97 28 a7 00 96 4a ..)....(.e.(...J + 00c0 - a0 31 76 f0 03 e3 d0 f6-af 99 4a bb d0 16 d7 e5 .1v.......J..... + 00d0 - e0 0c 0e e1 1f e6 84 fc-b1 0f f9 ff c9 72 12 af .............r.. + 00e0 - 52 07 9d 18 88 34 49 0e-34 0f fb 69 9d 26 1e 27 R....4I.4..i.&.' + 00f0 - 1b 59 c9 63 60 b3 6a 8b-25 01 42 e5 aa 7d 5b 16 .Y.c`.j.%.B..}[. + 0100 - 48 H ]]> To allow reproduction of the signature results, the end-entity @@ -1064,75 +979,75 @@ private key is provided. For brevity, the other two private keys are not. + -Signing of "192.0.2.0/24,US,WA,Seattle," (terminated by CR and LF) yields the -following detached CMS signature. +Signing of the two lines "2001:db8::/32,NL,,," and +"2001:db8::/48,NL,NL-NH,Amsterdam," (both terminated by CR and LF) +yields the following detached CMS signature.