diff --git a/draft-ietf-opsawg-9092-update.xml b/draft-ietf-opsawg-9092-update.xml
index 9a5d1ed..2b9ee50 100644
--- a/draft-ietf-opsawg-9092-update.xml
+++ b/draft-ietf-opsawg-9092-update.xml
@@ -223,8 +223,8 @@
target="RFC4012" format="default"/>. Since then, it has been
modified and extensively enhanced in the Regional Internet
Registry (RIR) community, mostly by RIPE . Currently, change control effectively lies
- in the operator community.
+ format="default"/>. At the time of publishing this document,
+ change control effectively lies in the operator community.
@@ -679,14 +679,14 @@
target="auth"/>.
- Currently, geolocation providers have bulk WHOIS data access at
- all the RIRs. An anonymized version of such data is openly
- available for all RIRs except ARIN, which requires an
- authorization. However, for users without such authorization,
- the same result can be achieved with extra RDAP effort. There is
- open-source code to pass over such data across all RIRs, collect
- all geofeed references, and process them .
+ At the time of publishing this document, geolocation providers
+ have bulk WHOIS data access at all the RIRs. An anonymized
+ version of such data is openly available for all RIRs except
+ ARIN, which requires an authorization. However, for users
+ without such authorization, the same result can be achieved with
+ extra RDAP effort. There is open-source code to pass over such
+ data across all RIRs, collect all geofeed references, and
+ process them .
@@ -732,8 +732,9 @@
Implementation Status
- Currently, the geofeed: attribute in inetnum objects has
- been implemented in the RIPE and APNIC databases.
+ At the time of publishing this document, the geofeed: attribute
+ in inetnum objects has been implemented in the RIPE and APNIC
+ databases.
@@ -742,13 +743,13 @@
- Currently, the registry data published by ARIN are not the same
- RPSL as that of the other registries (see for a survey of the WHOIS Tower of Babel);
- therefore, when fetching from ARIN via FTP , WHOIS , the Registration Data
- Access Protocol (RDAP) for a
+ survey of the WHOIS Tower of Babel); therefore, when fetching
+ from ARIN via FTP ,
+ WHOIS , the
+ Registration Data Access Protocol (RDAP) , etc., the "NetRange" attribute/key must be
treated as "inetnum", and the "Comment" attribute must be
treated as "remarks".