changes since 9092 secting

draft-ymbk-9092update.xml

@@ -8,7 +8,9 @@
 <?rfc compact="yes"?>
 <?rfc subcompact="no"?>
 
-<rfc category="std" docName="draft-ymbk-sidrops-9020-update-00" submissionType="IETF" consensus="true" ipr="trust200902">
+<rfc category="std" docName="draft-ymbk-sidrops-9092-update-00"
+     submissionType="IETF" consensus="true" ipr="trust200902"
+     obsoletes="9092" >
 
   <front>
 
@@ -79,9 +81,9 @@
       <t>
         This document specifies how to augment the Routing Policy
         Specification Language inetnum: class to refer specifically to
-        geofeed data comma-separated values (CSV) files and describes an
+        geofeed data files and describes an optional scheme that uses
-        optional scheme that uses the Routing Public Key Infrastructure
+        the Routing Public Key Infrastructure to authenticate the
-        to authenticate the geofeed data CSV files.
+        geofeed datafiles.
       </t>
 </abstract>
 
@@ -105,8 +107,8 @@
         This document specifies how to augment the Routing Policy
         Specification Language (RPSL) <xref target="RFC2725"
         format="default"/> inetnum: class to refer specifically to
-        geofeed data CSV files and how to prudently use them.  In all
+        geofeed data files and how to prudently use them.  In all places
-        places inetnum: is used, inet6num: should also be assumed <xref
+        inetnum: is used, inet6num: should also be assumed <xref
         target="RFC4012" format="default"/>.
       </t>
       <t>
@@ -119,6 +121,31 @@
         An optional utterly awesome but slightly complex means for
         authenticating geofeed data is also defined.
       </t>
+      <t>
+	This document obsoletes <xref target="RFC9092"/>.  Changes from
+	<xref target="RFC9092"/> include the following:
+        <ul spacing="compact">
+	  <li>
+	    It is no longer assumed that a geofeed file is a CSV, comma
+	    separated value list.
+	  </li>
+	  <li>
+	    RIPE has implemented the geofeed: attribute.
+	  </li>
+	  <li>
+	    Allow, but discourage, an inetnum: to have both a geofeed
+	    remarks: attribute and a geofeed: attribute.
+	  </li>
+	  <li>
+	    Stress that authenticating geofeed data is optional.
+	  </li>
+	  <li>
+	    IP Address Delegation extensions must not use "inherit".
+	  </li>
+	</ul>
+
+      </t>
+	
       <section numbered="true" toc="default">
         <name>Requirements Language</name>
 
@@ -207,7 +234,7 @@
       
 <sourcecode type="rpsl">      <![CDATA[
     inetnum: 192.0.2.0/24 # example
-    remarks: Geofeed https://example.com/geofeed.csv
+    remarks: Geofeed https://example.com/geofeed
         ]]></sourcecode>
       <t>
         While we leave global agreement of RPSL modification to the
@@ -219,7 +246,7 @@
       </t>
       <sourcecode type="rpsl"><![CDATA[
     inetnum: 192.0.2.0/24 # example
-    geofeed: https://example.com/geofeed.csv
+    geofeed: https://example.com/geofeed
         ]]></sourcecode>
       <t>
         Registries <bcp14>MAY</bcp14>, for the interim, provide a mix of
@@ -249,13 +276,18 @@
       </t>
 
       <t>
-        Any particular inetnum: object <bcp14>MUST</bcp14> have, at
+        Any particular inetnum: object <bcp14>SHOULD</bcp14> have, at
         most, one geofeed reference, whether a remarks: or a proper
         geofeed: attribute when it is implemented.  If there is more
         than one, the geofeed: attribute SHOULD be used.
       </t>
       <t>
-        If a geofeed CSV file describes multiple disjoint ranges of IP
+	For inetnum:s covering the same address range, or an inetnum:
+	with both remarks: and geofeed: attributes, a signed geofeed
+	file SHOULD be preferred over an unsigned file.
+      </t>
+      <t>
+        If a geofeed file describes multiple disjoint ranges of IP
         address space, there are likely to be geofeed references from
         multiple inetnum: objects.  Files with geofeed references from
         multiple inetnum: objects are not compatible with the signing
@@ -364,8 +396,8 @@
         identical to or a subset of A. "Address range" is used here
         because inetnum: objects and RPKI certificates need not align on
         Classless Inter-Domain Routing (CIDR) <xref target="RFC4632"/>
-        prefix boundaries, while those of the CSV lines in a geofeed
+        prefix boundaries, while those of the lines in a geofeed file
-        file do.
+        do.
       </t>
       <t>
         As the signer specifies the covered RPKI resources relevant to
@@ -627,9 +659,10 @@
     <section anchor="iana" numbered="true" toc="default">
       <name>IANA Considerations</name>
       <t>
-        IANA has registered object identifiers for one content
+        The IANA is requested to change the Description of the object
-        type in the "SMI Security for S/MIME CMS Content Type
+        identifier for the content type in the "SMI Security for S/MIME
-        (1.2.840.113549.1.9.16.1)" registry as follows:
+        CMS Content Type (1.2.840.113549.1.9.16.1)" registry to the
+        following:
       </t>
 
 <table anchor="iana_table">
@@ -643,8 +676,8 @@
   <tbody>        
     <tr>
       <td>47</td>
-      <td>id-ct-geofeedCSVwithCRLF</td>
+      <td>id-ct-geofeedwithCRLF</td>
-      <td>RFC 9092</td>
+      <td>this document</td>
     </tr>
   </tbody>
 </table>
@@ -671,6 +704,7 @@
       <?rfc include="reference.RFC.6486.xml"?>
       <?rfc include="reference.RFC.8805.xml"?>
       <?rfc include="reference.RFC.8933.xml"?>
+      <?rfc include="reference.RFC.9092.xml"?>
     </references>
     
     <references title="Informative References">
@@ -1159,10 +1193,9 @@ following detached CMS signature.</t>
         <contact fullname="John Scudder"/>, <contact fullname="Kyle
         Rose"/> (SECDIR), <contact fullname="Martin Duke"/>, <contact
         fullname="Murray Kucherawy"/>, <contact fullname="Paul
-        Kyzivat"/> (GENART), <contact fullname="Rob Wilton"/>, and
+        Kyzivat"/> (GENART), <contact fullname="Rob Wilton"/>, <contact
-        <contact fullname="Roman Danyliw"/>.  The authors also thank
+        fullname="Roman Danyliw"/>, and <contact fullname="Ties de
-        <contact fullname="George Michaelson"/>, the awesome document
+        Kock"/>.
-        shepherd.
       </t>
   </section>