new example from russ and job, -03 published

draft-ietf-opsawg-9092-update.xml

@@ -8,7 +8,7 @@
 <?rfc compact="yes"?>
 <?rfc subcompact="no"?>
 
-<rfc category="std" docName="draft-ietf-opsawg-9092-update-02"
+<rfc category="std" docName="draft-ietf-opsawg-9092-update-03"
      submissionType="IETF" consensus="true" ipr="trust200902"
      obsoletes="9092" version="2" >
 
@@ -813,6 +813,22 @@
         There are no new actions needed by the IANA.
       </t>
     </section>
+    <section title="Acknowledgments" anchor="acks">
+      <t>Thanks to Rob Austein for CMS and detached signature clue,
+      George Michaelson for the first and substantial external review,
+      and Erik Kline who was too shy to agree to coauthorship.
+      Additionally, we express our gratitude to early implementors,
+      including Menno Schepers; Flavio Luciani; Eric Dugas; and Kevin
+      Pack.  Also, thanks to the following geolocation providers who
+      are consuming geofeeds with this described solution: Jonathan
+      Kosgei (ipdata.co), Ben Dowling (ipinfo.io), and Pol Nisenblat
+      (bigdatacloud.com).  For an amazing number of helpful reviews,
+      we thank Job Snijders, who also found an ASN.1 'inherit' issue;
+      Adrian Farrel; Antonio Prado; Francesca Palombini; Jean-Michel
+      Combes (INTDIR); John Scudder; Kyle Rose (SECDIR); Martin Duke;
+      Murray Kucherawy; Paul Kyzivat (GENART); Rob Wilton; Roman
+      Danyliw; and Ties de Kock.</t>
+    </section>
   </middle>
   <back>
 
@@ -924,9 +940,11 @@
     
 
     <section title="Example" anchor="example">
+
   <t>
-      This appendix provides an example, including a trust anchor, a CA
+    This appendix provides an example, including a trust anchor, a
-      certificate subordinate to the trust anchor, an end-entity
+    CRL signed by the trust anchor, a CA certificate subordinate to
+    the trust anchor, a CRL signed by the CA, an end-entity
     certificate subordinate to the CA for signing the geofeed, and a
     detached signature.</t>
 
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 -----END CERTIFICATE-----
+]]></artwork></figure>
+
+   <t>
+   The CRL issued by the trust anchor.</t>
+
+<figure><artwork><![CDATA[
+-----BEGIN X509 CRL-----
+MIIBjjB4AgEBMA0GCSqGSIb3DQEBCwUAMBUxEzARBgNVBAMTCmV4YW1wbGUtdGEX
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+Dq9IJ9RuBsQagykwbwLbzlTr
+-----END X509 CRL-----
 ]]></artwork></figure>
 
    <t>
@@ -998,6 +1033,24 @@ x8CyiVxjcVc5e0AmS1rJfL6LIfwmtive/N/eBtIM92HkBA==
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 F+WPd2Mdaby93ASOE2MyXdaaOf8Av3wIpMvhMuAuM03V/mPVksqxUbfOLw==
 -----END CERTIFICATE-----
+]]></artwork></figure>
+
+   <t>
+   The CRL issued by the CA.</t>
+
+<figure><artwork><![CDATA[
+-----BEGIN X509 CRL-----
+MIIBrTCBlgIBATANBgkqhkiG9w0BAQsFADAzMTEwLwYDVQQDEygzQUNFMkNFRjRG
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+XQ==
+-----END X509 CRL-----
 ]]></artwork></figure>
 
    <t>
@@ -1047,8 +1100,8 @@ x8CyiVxjcVc5e0AmS1rJfL6LIfwmtive/N/eBtIM92HkBA==
  10    1:    INTEGER 2
                 :     }
  13   20:   INTEGER
-                 :   27 AD 39 40 83 D7 F2 B5 B9 9B 86 70 C7 75 B2
+                :   27 AD 39 40 83 D7 F2 B5 B9 9B 86 70 C7 75 B2 B9 6E
-                 :   B9 6E E1 66 EC
+                :   E1 66 EC
  35   13:   SEQUENCE {
  37    9:    OBJECT IDENTIFIER
                 :     sha256WithRSAEncryption (1 2 840 113549 1 1 11)
@@ -1144,13 +1197,15 @@ x8CyiVxjcVc5e0AmS1rJfL6LIfwmtive/N/eBtIM92HkBA==
                 :        }
                 :       }
 584   24:     SEQUENCE {
- 586    3:      OBJECT IDENTIFIER certificatePolicies (2 5 29 32)
+586    3:      OBJECT IDENTIFIER 
+        :       certificatePolicies (2 5 29 32)
 591    1:      BOOLEAN TRUE
 594   14:      OCTET STRING, encapsulates {
 596   12:       SEQUENCE {
 598   10:        SEQUENCE {
 600    8:         OBJECT IDENTIFIER
-                 :          resourceCertificatePolicy (1 3 6 1 5 5 7 14 2)
+                :          resourceCertificatePolicy
+                :          (1 3 6 1 5 5 7 14 2)
                 :          }
                 :         }
                 :        }
@@ -1312,5 +1367,4 @@ x8CyiVxjcVc5e0AmS1rJfL6LIfwmtive/N/eBtIM92HkBA==
 
       </section>
     </back>
-
   </rfc>