diff --git a/draft-ietf-sidrops-8210bis.xml b/draft-ietf-sidrops-8210bis.xml
index 6b99f44..88acc61 100644
--- a/draft-ietf-sidrops-8210bis.xml
+++ b/draft-ietf-sidrops-8210bis.xml
@@ -248,13 +248,11 @@
       </t>
       <t>
 	A VRP is effective if it is in the fetched set from any of the
-	currently preferred caches.  Therefore, if the router is
-	fetching from multiple equal preference caches, then withdraws
-	of a particular VRP invalidating some prefix may take effect
-	comparitively later than announcements of that VRP.  All in-use
-	caches must have withdrawn the VRP for the router to not have a
-	copy; but if the router has received an announcement from any
-	cache then that VRP is in effect.
+	currently preferred caches.  Therefore, a VRP takes effect on
+	the router when the first cache serves that VRP, and the VRP is
+	in effect until the last cache withdraws that VRP.  Thus, in a
+	global sense, the effect of a VRP announcement propagates more
+	quickly than a withdraw,
       </t>
       <t>
         Periodically, the router sends a Serial Query to the cache the