diff --git a/draft-ietf-sidrops-8210bis.xml b/draft-ietf-sidrops-8210bis.xml
index e1432a4..6b99f44 100644
--- a/draft-ietf-sidrops-8210bis.xml
+++ b/draft-ietf-sidrops-8210bis.xml
@@ -247,12 +247,14 @@
on their caches and the Global RPKI.
- If the router is fetching from multiple caches, then withdraws
- of a particular VRP invalidating some prefix may take effect for
- longer than announcements of that VRP. This is because all
+ A VRP is effective if it is in the fetched set from any of the
+ currently preferred caches. Therefore, if the router is
+ fetching from multiple equal preference caches, then withdraws
+ of a particular VRP invalidating some prefix may take effect
+ comparitively later than announcements of that VRP. All in-use
caches must have withdrawn the VRP for the router to not have a
- copy; but if any router has received an announcement then that
- VRP is in effect.
+ copy; but if the router has received an announcement from any
+ cache then that VRP is in effect.
Periodically, the router sends a Serial Query to the cache the