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<?rfc compact="yes"?>
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<?rfc subcompact="no"?>
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<rfc category="std" docName="draft-ietf-sidrops-8210bis-20"
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<rfc category="std" docName="draft-ietf-sidrops-8210bis-21"
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submissionType="IETF" ipr="trust200902" version="2" consensus="yes">
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<front>
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Caches and routers MAY use Transport Layer Security (TLS)
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transport <xref target="RFC8446"/> using port rpki-rtr-tls
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(324); see <xref target="IANA"/>. Conformance to <xref
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target="RFC7525"/> modern cipher suites is REQUIRED.
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target="BCP195"/> modern cipher suites is REQUIRED.
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</t>
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</list></t>
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described.
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</t>
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<t>
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<xref target="order"/> describes an optional but RECOMMENDED
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ordering of all PDUs which allows mitigation of the race
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conditions described in <xref target="races"/>.
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<xref target="order"/> describes a RECOMMENDED ordering of all
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PDUs which allows mitigation of the race conditions described in
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<xref target="races"/>.
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</t>
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<t>
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<xref target="trans"/> describes how a router MAY process
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<section anchor="races" title="ROA PDU Race Minimization">
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<t>
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When a cache is sending ROA (IPv4 or IPv6) VRPs to a router
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When a cache is sending ROA (IPv4 or IPv6) VRPs to a router,
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undesirable race conditions are possible:
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<list style="hanging">
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<t hangText="Make Before Break:">
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exceptions in <xref target="races"/> above, ordering MUST be,
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as follows:
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</t>
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<list style="symbols">
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<t>
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<ol type="%d">
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<li>
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PDUs are first ordered by PDU Type,
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</t>
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<t>
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</li>
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<li>
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IPv4 and IPv6 Prefix VRPs are ordered by: first IPvX Prefix,
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second Prefix Length, third Max Length, and fourth Autonomous
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System Number. Treating announcements of VPUs with AS 0 as
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sorting last, and withdrawals as sorting first, fulfills the "AS
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0" requirement of <xref target="races"/>. Treating
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announcements of sub-prefixes as sorting first fulfills the
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"Longest Prefix Match" requirement of <xref target="races"/>.
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</t>
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<t>
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second Prefix Length (largest value first for announcements,
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lowest value first for withdrawals), third Max Length, and
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fourth Autonomous System Number. Treating announcements of
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VPUs with AS 0 as sorting last, and withdrawals as sorting
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first, fulfills the "AS 0" requirement of <xref
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target="races"/>. Treating announcements of sub-prefixes as
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sorting first fulfills the "Longest Prefix Match"
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requirement of <xref target="races"/>.
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</li>
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<li>
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Router Key PDUs are ordered by AS Number and then Subject Public
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Key Info.
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</t>
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<t>
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</li>
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<li>
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And ASPA PDUs ordered by Customer AS.
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</t>
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</list>
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</li>
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</ol>
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<t>
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Unless specifically configured for a particular cache, a
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router MUST NOT depend on payload PDU ordering.
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<?rfc include="reference.RFC.6487.xml"?>
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<?rfc include="reference.RFC.6810.xml"?>
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<?rfc include="reference.RFC.6811.xml"?>
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<?rfc include="reference.RFC.7525.xml"?>
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<?rfc include="reference.RFC.8174.xml"?>
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<?rfc include="reference.RFC.8210.xml"?>
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<?rfc include="reference.RFC.8446.xml"?>
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<?rfc include="reference.RFC.8608.xml"?>
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<?rfc include="reference.RFC.8635.xml"?>
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<?rfc include="reference.BCP.195.xml"?>
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</references>
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<references title="Informative References">
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